A Plumber's Tale (Superhero Kinetic VN)

[Ulindor]

Hello!

I am new to REN'PY, and have been working on a kinetic VN called 'A Plumber's Tale'.  I have completed the rough version of ACT 1, and would like to share my current progress.  This will be a superhero VN covering a long story arc, and multiple characters' perspectives.

Any feedback/constructive criticism/ideas are more than welcome!  Just please keep in mind a few things:

I am pretty new to Ren'Py, also new to creating anything like this ever.  Please let me know if I'm making any silly mistakes, or if there is something I can optimize better (Feel free to decompile and rummage around!).

This will be a pretty long story, a lot of things aren't explained yet or might not make a lot of sense.  The end of this release is essentially just the starting point.

This is a rough draft, I still need to do things like change the GUI /Title Screen Setup/etc.  Any ideas are welcome! (I suck at choosing fonts!).

Thanks for your time, please let me know if there are any issues with downloading!

https://mega.nz/folder/yM43QYQJ#bI0NiliyyfS3g5DKl-V6_g

*4-17 Fixed misplaced diffuse transitions
*5-28 Rough chapter 2 completed
*5-29 Updated Title screen and basic font
*6-04 Tutorial added, misc dialogue  and video tweaks, image transitions added to make cuts less jarring

Chapter 0-1:





Chapter 2:

 

Edited June 4 by Ulindor
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[Ulindor]

Mods: Please let me know if you need anything else, I'm more than happy to update or change things!

 

I'll reserve this post for additional info, as to hopefully not spam the forum when I update.

 

 

*I'm working on Chapter 3, starting today.  CHapter 3 will have more action, as Chapter 0-2 were mainly setting up the major plot points.

Suggestions and feedback are welcome!

 

*Character fonts are going to be changed, but I will make chapter 3 first.
*The first fight scene was done a long time ago at 720p, so the current images are zoomed in.  I plan on redoing that scene at some point.  
*Im thinking of ACT or Chapter skips on the title screen when the story increases in size.

Edited June 4 by Ulindor
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