Shikitohno

Ok, guys I have been working on a Fan-fiction for Tsukihime that I have been working on for a few weeks at... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9442830/1/Tsuihime-Alternative The people on the site I have been posting it on have not been giving me much to work with on suggestions, so I am making this topic to hopefully get some feed back. I will give a brief description in a spoiler bellow just in case anyone is in fact interested in reading this. ...I am also trying to figure out a good name for a one of the enemies I came up with that is a vampire who uses snake familiars for all of his attacks, so if anyone can think of something I would appreciate it.

Ok, I am moving on after watching the YO-SHI-NO video once more I am good. I will now start reading Little Busters, which I download two months ago but I have not played it yet for some reason. Oh, and I have two routes for Kanon that I have yet to complete along with twenty others that I have download and not read or have put on hold.

Ok, I guess I will have to wait while studding Japanese, which would be some much easier if I was not such a lazy ass. I know only a few phrases and words after a three months of studding. Oh, well I my patience fails I guess I will try the reader I have it download and all that just have not installed it yet, though I have not download the games yet.

I am in agreement with you there.

I am thinking about download the Japanese version of the next two game after this one and reading them with the VN translator that is promoted on the news thing that Is connected to this site. Will that work with these games or should I wait the year for the other two games to come out, oh and is the program safe to use on a laptop?

I agree with these though they are supposed to be remaking Tsukihime with a route for Satsuki now, though I have not heard much more about lately.

I know but I was hoping for something I little better then that I mean, they did give all that build up and then everything end like that. Plus, already said I love the book, and that I am going to read it again at a later date. Plus, the ending of this one did not tick me off as much as other visual novels, Sabers route in fate/stay night is one of them along with Akiha from Tsukihime. And those are the my most favorite VNs, especially since they are what got me started reading VNs.

Thank you, I know I just love to read. When I have access to multiple books I can read about five or six in a week that are about four hundred pages long. Oh, and another thing I said this earlier, but I skip through the common route each time I started a new route so it cut the reading time in half.

Alright guys I am going to be straight up with you all I am flat out displeased with the final ending, why do they all have to be bitter sweet. I like parts of this store but at the same time just plain disliked how it end it is supposed end well for main character. Ugh, but my final decision is that I love the novel though there was a lot I did not like and I hope the fan disc get translated soon so that I can read it. I love the all the character and the story is good for the most part, even though there was irritating parts and then some terrible endings. I just do not understand why the character I like the most out of all of them had the worst ending in my opinion, that being Kotori and Shizuru. Now that empty filling is hitting me that I get when ever I finish a book, move or TV series, or game, damn I need to find a something else to read fast. Oh, for those who read the fan disc does it cover all the routes endings or just a few of them?

This is a very true thing, and I agree with you on this. Oh, on earlier note already said I was tired when I wrote that so...and I did not like how it left question marks floating around my head.

Ok thanks, I see they twisted the story around there was not expect that,....hmm. This one actual gets a little dark then all the others.

This one is going to take me longer to read, just because there is so much going on. Oh, and the choice is give you that is already picked, when you replay does it allow you to choose differently?

Just finished moon and, ugh... do not know what to think it was both depressing and interesting. I need to read Terra before I decided whether I full like this novel or not.

Same here I would be awesome and at the same time confusing as hell because the would not doubt have to explain all the complicated concepts. Oh, I am reading moon now and...

Was not expecting the opening animated video at the start of moon that was surprising, and it had stuff from all of the routes. Hmm, it was kind of awesome, though it kind of made me jump because as was not expecting it with random Japanese jumping out of my speakers and all.

Ok, thanks for the complement on reading fast it a skill I picked up after getting board a lot in school. And, you are right about one thing this books has made me stop a think on more then one occasion as I tried to wrap my head around stuff. Oh and this has nothing to with what you said I wish that they change the OP screen when you finish routes, I like the first.

That be true they do like make the story incredible depressing at times, and the try and make I better later...well most of the time.

To answer your question I skip through the common route and all scene that I read before when I started a new route. Plus, I am general a fast reader I have finished the last harry potter book in less then a day so.....

Just finished Akane's the like the other routes was bitter sweet, so I liked and disliked this route. I do not like the ending particularly well sine.... Will be starting moon tomorrow I hope it is not as terrible I have read many mixed review about it so, I guess I will just I have to see.

Yes I think when I finish the game I will replay it just to watch that video it was genius. When I first saw it I was kind of bored just reading along and the next thing.....boom, you get the picture. I was so surprising I laughed hard enough for tears leak from my eyes.

Sadly I agree with you on this XD

Sorry I was tired at the tame so wrote I bit much dude. It not as I did not like the ending but you might, it was just not a how I would end the story as a writer. I truth I was not that bad it just the build up was got worse and worse then they give the ending which did not satisfy me. So again I apologize to you for that post, I just like to complain a lot and had staid up twenty fours hours that day so it was not in a good mood. You should continue reading it this VN is great just complicated at time, it just depends on what you like in you VN's. I tend to like the VN's that have just straight up good ending instead of bitter sweet and depressing ones, so this one get on my nerves a little but I still love it.

I complain yes, sorry, I just something my entire family has encoded in our DNA. If all sit down to watch a movie is guaranteed that someone is going to complain about it, most of the time. But that aside I love this visual novel for the most part there are thing I would have done differently all through it but...eh I am not the writer. Plus is mostly complaints about certain parts route or routes in particular I like all the route save for Kotori and Shizuru, and that is just because of the terrible endings. Kotori and Shizuru are my favorite character out of all the one in the game just hate how there stories end.

Just finished Shizuru's route did not like the end much at all, and while on the subject please tell me the story for her route is continued in the fan disc and end better then this...Grrr. I love how every other route in the story has a terrible ass ending like this one, it just make me worry how the next route going to end and I have three more to go...ugh.

Ok, finished Lucia route what the hell up with the bitter sweet ending, sheesh. Moving on to Shizuru then Akane after that so far I like this novel a lot better then I did after finishing Kotori route. From one of the earl comment from earl said this VN certainly does give you a lot to digest and this is actually stuff I really like that shows up. It has a route that I do not like, but for the most part story and plot are all good. Plus so far it as at least earned the tenth place on my top favorite VN's even though I have my complaints.