Ptysiodaktyl

Dun durudun I'm back. I'm done with the demo and DAMN IT you just had to leave a cliffhanger . I love and hate you at the same time. Great job on the characters. I haven't read a VN that got me interested in EVERY character ever before. The story seems like something that could actually happen, that is a bit scary, and makes it all the more intriguing. Can't wait to read more~! But I can't just keep flattering you now, can I? /RantModeOn 2. 'Why were you were?!' 3. I believe it should be 'Anyway, unless you've been secretly (...). 4. I think Senri should ask 'What is so weird about me?' instead, or Ken's answer makes no sense. 5. The dangers of NicoNicoTine. 6. The save/load menu slot count is off. Thanks for the awesome demo, I'll be sticking around for more content/info~ Thanks for letting us get a taste of something different than all the big-boobs, lolis and twintailed tsundere VNs (not that I have anything against any of these), always fun to experience something new. Keep up the good work and make it a grand success

Looks awesome Downloading the demo. Big hug from for creating the android version ~ Edit: I played for a bit and it's good, The art is on a high level, the bgm matches the story nicely... There are a few things I'd personally change though. Can you perhaps mirror Setsuna's sprite for a few moments in this scene to make her actually look at Kyou? Would be a nice touch :v 2. Although I realise this is still a demo, the lack of transitions between the scenes/days hurt 3. I was disappointed I couldn't (or at least I don't know how to) hide the text window to fully appreciate the CGs. There is a 'Menu' button at the bottom so do you think you could make the RMB hide the text instead? 4. Meaningless choices - this is purely a personal opinion, I just hate them as they make me save/load more than I should while not really doing anything xD 5. I'm seriously sorry about this one and I don't even know if it's intended or not but that line bothers me WAY more than it should :V 6. Why is Kyou only wearing a T shirt? XD Isn't he cold? I'll come back to nag some more once I'm done with the demo Peace out~

Great job guys, it's going a lot faster than I expected~! I really hope you won't stop at 99% for some unknown reason haha *breaks into hysterical laughter* because I realllllllly want to read it and was in the middle of learning japanese just to read the future with Kazuko route but kanji be difficult and confusing. Glad to hear someone actually picked this project