darkotakusouls

I've been working hard on this visual novel for the past 3 years, and I was hoping to find some people to read over the rough draft. Please tell me about spelling errors, grammar errors, plot holes, I want to know everything. If you think a line should be written better, or even if you have an idea for a scene that should be added, please tell me. If you help me make the visual novel better, by finding mistakes or adding suggesting, I will add your name to the credits. I'm mainly concerned about plot holes and making sure the entire story makes sense to everyone. I would strongly like to note that this rough draft does NOT contain the character development episodes, which aren't required for understanding the characters or the story, but they do help you understand the characters a little bit more. I have them done, but I want to re-write them to make them better. Inside the folder you may notice a TXT document labeled, EXTRA INFO. It contains information and questions on the things that happened in the story that are not explained. I plan on adding this to the visual novel later as an unlockable "Ask Rika" mode. Please don't read it until after you read the visual novel, it contains spoilers. Summary: Devil Corp is holding a set of sexy tournaments to show off their newest armor, REN. When equipped, a user can spawn weapons, change clothes, and even defy death itself. But not everyone in the universe is happy with Devil Corp’s newest product. Highvote, a nation with an extreme democracy, has voted to end everyone’s fun. To make things worse, Nicole is going berserk, and there doesn’t seem to be any way to stop her. Could she have found a glitch in the armor’s programming, or could there be something bigger going on? Either way, the REN users aren’t just going to sit around and have their freedom taken away without a fight. Word Count: 65,000~ This visual novel is rated +16 Please do not read this visual novel if you are under the age of 16. This visual novel contains - Blood and Gore - Censored Nipples - Intense Violence - Mature Humor - Partial Nudity - Sexual Violence - Strong Language - Strong Sexual Comedy - Use of Alcohol Download: http://www.mediafire.com/download/ukj76bqdni5uu7s/MW-MAINVN_ROUGHDRAFT-1.1-all.zip For more information please check out the Moe Wars game blog: http://moewars.com/blog/ Also you can easily get in contact with me on the Moe Wars forum: http://moewars.icyboards.net/ or by visiting our Discord channel. I know that it may take some people a few months to read it since it's a very long story. It would mean a lot to me if you simply posted if you plan on reading it, so I don't have to look at an empty thread for 3 months in depression wondering if anyone is actually reading it or not. Screenshots

I'm getting corpse party blood drive, I'm super excited.

I'm excited to see this mainly so I can continue playing my Jurassic Park Lego game.

This is my first time making a game with RPG Maker. It was a lot of fun. If a lot of people like my game I plan on buying the full version and making more games about Uzi and other Moe Wars characters. I hope you enjoy it. The game requires RPG Maker VX ACE to play. You can download the free trial from their site. Make sure you download the VX ACE one. http://www.rpgmakerweb.com/ Summary: After going into one of her drugged delusional states, Uzi finds herself in a familiar looking castle. There she finds a cloaked figure that wants to help her remember her past, that she had forced herself to forget. She soon winds up fighting to protect a small kingdom from ogres. This game does not promote the use of drugs, alcohol, or anything else horrible you can think of. Rating +17: Drugs/ Alcohol use, Sexual Content (In the form of comedy, and storyline. There are no actual sexual pictures.), Language. [Mediafire / ZIP] http://www.mediafire.com/download/4f18rxgq97gbdvw/UziGameLite.zip CONTROLS [Z] = Yes [X] = No / Menu

I made a game with RPG maker, can I just like post that in the creative corner?

I got a new Freezing manga, but I haven't started reading it yet. Too busy working on other stuff.

I choose myself, because I wouldn't get married and have kids. So there for there no need for me to think about it :3

My username is actually what I used for my old forum before I changed it to Moe Wars

I thought I would make a thread to show off all the Moe Wars characters that I have photoshoped. I use a doll maker called kisekae2 to help me with the body design. Since I have so many I will just post the links to my deviantART account. http://darkrchaos.deviantart.com/ Here's one of the most popular characters so far. Her name is Uzi. She's not in any of the my visual novels. She more mascot character. Well Rika is actually the mascot character, she a friend of the mascot character . Right now I'm making a RPG game using her.

I been working on this game right now. It's not my favorite, but it's still fun.

Hyperdimension Neptunia and Highschool DXD

The weird part is the western world are the ones that are into the extreme furry stuff. It funny how aimed at the anime cat ears stuff, but looked pasted everything else.

Here are the 3 character development episodes I have made using Ren'py. I figured I should put them in the same thread since they go together, but you don't really have to read them in any order. I am working on the main conflict episode, which I may need help programing but I will make a thread for that later after I at least get the ruff draft done. I tagged it "Sexual Content" but it doesn't actually have any sex in it. It's just the has strong sexual styled comedy. On Ren'py I had labeled it +16 because of this, but there is no nudity or anything in the visual novels. Summary: Devil Corp is holding tournaments to test out their new nanobots known as REN. These nanobots can protect users from harm, spawn weapons, and even give them supernatural powers. These are the character development episodes that happen before the tournaments. Moe Wars: Crimson Salmon Summary: Hannah gets a free paid vacation to the tournaments. To make it better her best friend Maria, who she hasn’t seen in a long time, joins her. [5,255 words / Ages 16+] Download Links (ZIP / Mediafire) http://www.mediafire.com/download/iwwn399iijb62zh/MoeWarsCD1-1.2-all.zip (RAR / Ge.tt) Part 1: http://ge.tt/2Y2FBnB2/v/0 Part 2: http://ge.tt/2Y2FBnB2/v/1 Ren'Py Listing: http://games.renpy.org/game/moe-wars-crimson-salmon Download Links on Moe Wars: http://moewars.icyboards.net/showthread.php?tid=2253 Moe Wars: Golden Daisy Summary: Nina gets a job offer from them to be a guard while they hold the tournaments. The pay is good, but she’s not sure if she wants to leave her best friend June. What if something happens to her? [6,375 words / Ages 16+] Download Links (ZIP / Mediafire) http://www.mediafire.com/download/vhtlakv30pmquyf/MoeWarsCD2-1.2-all.zip (RAR / Ge.tt) Part 1: http://ge.tt/9qkfLF62/v/2 Part 2: http://ge.tt/9qkfLF62/v/3 Ren'Py Listing: http://games.renpy.org/game/moe-wars-golden-daisy Download Links on Moe Wars: http://moewars.icyboards.net/showthread.php?tid=1949 Moe Wars: Party Possums Summary: After a horrible event, Alice falls into a deep depression. But that isn't going to stop Lilly from trying to cheer her up. [4,087 words / Ages 16+] Download Links (ZIP / Mediafire) http://www.mediafire.com/download/w2q1izlxjg4aa8v/MoeWarsCD3-1.4-all.zip (7ZIP / Ge.tt) Part 1: http://ge.tt/8GAprjJ2/v/0 Part 2: http://ge.tt/8GAprjJ2/v/1 Ren'Py Listing: http://games.renpy.org/game/moe-wars-party-possums Download Links on Moe Wars: http://moewars.icyboards.net/showthread.php?tid=2632 Wow this thread too a while to make... I hope you enjoy my visual novels. If you interested in the Moe Wars universe you can find more information about it here: http://moewars.icyboards.net/showthread.php?tid=2288

Yea I know the difference, I'm actually working on both.