This is actually pretty alright. It's written fairly well, and the music and art isn't too bad either. I would think my only problem is, a few nitpicks, with some fairly few inconsistencies. Like, how if you wait before beginning the search. Gada shows up late and your friend is dead. However, if you do the search right away Gada shows up much earlier to help you search. Then there's the whole thing where you need to have your words translated for the old man to understand. But you can understand what he's saying just fine. Other than that, I would say its just fine.
I like the multiple choices, and story is interesting enough. Not much of a fan of the "endings" though. Anyhow. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work!