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  1. Ahah nope. it's only in Volume 1, more girls in Volume 2, when DW reach the trainee center
  2. Hi there! It's been a while, I come back with my new project, a visual novel series named (weirdly named) Dragon and Weed: Origins. First of all, please note that English is not my first language, the VN scripts has been translated and we'll hire a professionnal and native proofreader, as soon as we succed our Kickstarter campaign. DWO is based on the original eponymous comics which was released in 2009 and have 77 chapters. It is a three-season series that mixes comedy, epic action and adventure: Season 1: OutBreak Season 2: The Fallen Season 3: Nemesis Faction We are currently working on the first season that is made of 5 volumes (~50 episodes). In this season, Dray and Lushian two young soldier who, having completed the extremely difficult military and spiritual program “Professional Assassins” will join an ancient secret organization. In OutBreak, events mainly take place in the organization training center where the trainee and instructors will have to face the unusual temper of our two protagonists. Features: - 1080p/Full HD Max resolution - Epic Action/ Adventure story - Fully voiced - Full color traditional and animated CGs - Awesome Original Soundtrack - Bonus and Hidden scenes The series will be available first for Windows, in English and French languages. World of Dragon and Weed: We're in 2053, few years ago, the world was ruled by war, conflicts and a conglomerate that manipulated it. Right now, political entities are trying to keep a fragile peace, the United-Nations of Europe (also called United-States of Europe), the Africa's Joint-Nations Alliance (AJNA) and the Diplomatic Alliance of the Asian Pentagon (DAAP) are the most influential. Characters: Here are the main characters of Season 1's Volume 1 - Alexander 'Dragon' Drayzaai: He is a lazy guy, a pervert and womaniser who enjoys driving the people around him crazy. In addition he has that Chibi personnality that makes him more childish, although he can sometimes be serious. - Lushian 'Weed' Nicolier: Lushian is really clever and professionnal person that can be touched by hardly anything. He's that cool guy who seems to be bored by everyone and who has lost his faith in humanity. Lushian have a limited trust: he would trust his life in a very small circle of friends, Alexander being one of them. - Rose: Former member of a private police force, she's now a lieutenant of the European Army (UNECA) as excellent that she hold a captain position by ruling a whole section. She know Dragon and Weed for a while and have a very conflictual relationship with them. - Amanda Hidejirō: Amanda is a scientist who have been kidnapped by a terrorist group. She's not custom to field work. - Benjamin Denarg: Also know as Colonel Quasar, he's a hi-ranked officer in a shadowy ancestral secret organization. Oh and is as perverted as Dragon. - Mobius: He's a Commando trainee of the Organization, a little too sure of himself. - Lucifer: She's also a Commando trainee of the Organization, cold tempered, she try her best not to kill Dragon. - Theodore Gregson-Mitchell: Lieutenant-General of the UNECA, he's a former intelligence officer of a powerful private army. Cold, merciless and result focused, he's linked to an other secret organization. - Galindo-Gomez: Known for being a sadist, he's the captain of the actual most powerful private army, the Favelas Brothers PMC. Screens: Conclusion: The Season 1 is currently on Kickstarter and Greenlight so if you like the project, please support us. A short demo will be available in few weeks, meanwhile, you can watch the Volume 1's teaser: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4y3ODSdrA4 Follow OG-ZONE on Facebook, Twitter and YouTube.
  3. Description page have been edited Thanks for your help and Tiago's one, I'll think about this issues for my next creations !
  4. Hi Decay, Lol I'm not affraid of brutally honest people don't worry and for what I've read your comment is helping so no problem However, what do you mean when you talk about a "new effort" ? Do you suggest to translate the game from zero ? Because there will be mistake again and an other correction would be needed. And are you basing your thought on the description ? This is not the game translator who made it, I did, and my english level isn't at the same level of her ^^' Anyway, I'm not trying to justify or minimize your word, I take seriously criticism who need to and the quality of my works.
  5. Haha feel so famous in introductions threads~ Thank you all of you ! @ Havoc, Thanks for the list I've didn't see it the first time ! I'll check that @ Jibril, lol there is a lot of artist in Paris (and a lot much better than me~~), so not a dream but I have no complaint about it
  6. @Heizei_koukousei: Lol I didn't knew the website, but thanks to Google I do know @Tiagofvarela: Ah I understand, the english translator was French so I think it was predictable ^^' If you're interested to make some correction, it would be very nice. I've check several times the english version, but as English isn't my first language I've probably missed a lot of mistake :S I can provide you the scenes texts if you have time for this
  7. Hey, Thank you all for this warm welcome ! Ah ah the VN I've made, you will laugh x) I didn't finish all of them but here's the list - Yukuri Panic Escalation an eroge a VN lover friend give me (this how I discover VNs~) - I've tryied Katawa Shoujo but not very far - Miko Gakkou Monogatari – Sanae Episode (on Vita) - I've try Juniper's Knot and the first episode of Dysfunctional Systems from Dischan - Xblaze from Arc System Work (demo, I'll will buy it on Vita //I'm an handle lover) - Last Virtues - Lighthouse from Starship Palindrom - The Walking Dead Season 1 on Vita too, I consider them as VN The next I plan to read is as recommanded, Stein;Gate who looks awesome, Danganronpa and probably some Personas. I will look at your recommandations too, as I didn't know a lot of VNs for now ! Edit : Here's my VN presentation topic : https://forums.fuwanovel.net/index.php?/topic/7073-snow-light-indie-vn/
  8. Hello VN readers, I'd like to introduce you my home-made visual novel done with a little indie team, Snow Light. First of all, I don't like to disappoint, so don't expect an super-hyper-badass graphic quality as we can see in very professionnal works. There is one artist in this work (me) not a whole team, it's not a complain but I think it have to be told Sooo, Snow Light is a Kinetic Novel, who propose some point-view choice (a few). The game takes place in a close futuristic world where nations are living in a fragile peace, military conflicts have become commonplace since the scarcity of first resources and the rise of private armies. You'll follow a professional of espionage missions, Snow, and will travel in various parts of the globe such as Turkmenistan, Russia or England. Click to see the game gallery Snow Light Feature : Story divide in 5 chapters, with more than 30 000 words dialogue length (~2h lengh) Anime inspired Graphic Style, CG based narration Intense action scene rythmed by Quick-Time Event Unique story arc, with some viewpoints changes 19 music tracks composed by two great composers, Petteri SAINIO and Christoph RAUCH The story is linked to the on-going indie series "Dragon and Weed : Origins",events are chronologically between episodes 22 and 42 (chapters 51 to 71 for the 'paper' version), but you don't need to read the series to understand Snow Light narration. You can download the game on STEAM* (*) : Or if you have no money, google told than you can download it some others plateforms, but if someone ask I didn't say anything/ I don't care of how you will have the game, but if you play to, I'd be very glad to have so feedback about no matter if you like or not the game. I plan to do other Visual Novel and it's important to me, and my team to know what is good and can be improved. Have a good read
  9. Hi there ! I'm Axel, a 23 yo artist who live in France near Paris ! I'm pretty new in the Visual Novel community but it's a media I really like. I'm a comics drawer and before knowing VN exist I was making my own series of video comics who're close to Visual novel in a sens. I really love the dimension that music, voices and SFX can give to motion comics, VN or audiobooks I general I like action, adventure ,science-fiction and narrative entertainment. To finish I'm also a indie game developer, I've release my first game in 2009 and lately my first VN that I will introduce in an other part of the forum See ya
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