It looks pretty good. As a native speaker, I noticed some problems in the grammar and writing style. I wouldn't mind helping you guys out and edit. Honestly, the sooner the better for me as I am done with my finals tommorrow. I'll have until the second week of January until classes pick up again. I'll be busier with schoolwork then and possibly other committments (Trying to get interships or lab work to build up my resume for when I graduate) but I should be able to still help.