help and suggestions for a bigginer VN creator

[darkarisen]

hey every one i've just started my own visual novel called Enchanting lullaby and there are some things i need help with i've got the basics like it works and has branch text and stuff but i need people to check it out tell me if any things wrong or what i can add  or change at the moment its just people talking, expression changes, different backgrounds and music i'll see if i can link it or something so you can tell me some how it is so far

hope i don't break any rules if i link to google drives

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B2jaav1urf4uTGZwc1NvNTNTNm8&authuser=0

just extract it some where and launch test.exe

just gunna add that one of the paths isn't finished as much as the other 

 

[Eclipsed]

Hi darkarisen welcome to the FuwaForums and good luck on your VN!

Check out this lengthy, lengthy thread created by our very own Diamon for some general information on creating VNs

[Tenkuru]

Welcome to the forums. 

First and foremost, you should probably change the settings since it's asking for permission at the moment.  

[firecat]

i dont have to download anything right, a game demo would be fine but if i download random stuff then i might not be able to help.

[darkarisen]

the demos in the rar im useing tyrano builder so i think you just hath to open the exe

Welcome to the forums.

First and foremost, you should probably change the settings since it's asking for permission at the moment.

i don't know what you mean which settings

edit

never mind i've sorted it thanks for telling me

[darkarisen]

Just gunna bump this and say I'm still looking for people to help out and I check this evey day to see new replies