Fan Made Visual Novels Feedback and Some Help

[Airi'sMaster11]

Greetings to everyone!

I'm attending college to become a fictional author. My motivation has always been anime and visual novels. I also wanted to write a visual novel at least once, so at first I thought to input my original story. But changes my mind since I initially want to create my story as a book. I also like science-fiction and gory zombies, so I wondered as to how to create both elements to be in perfect syc. I'll apologize beforehand since some of the plot is very familiar with "Gargantia on the Verdurous" and Outlander," perhaps there may be other title I don't know of. I'm also not skilled on both drawing and computers, so I would love some assistance on both areas. I'm sorry if I can only provide with the script. I'll apologize again since I don't know how to insert word document, so I just copied and paste. I would like to hear your opinions, so please enjoy:

A Galactic Soldier in the Middle of a Zombie Apocalypse (a temporarily title)

As the battle between the Galactic Military of the Milky Way (GMMW), a galactic alliance from another dimension who's purpose is to eliminate all deities from invading the Milky Way; and Nyarlathotep, a chaotic abomination, was turning for the alliance, but Nyarlathotep created a worm hole to escape the battle. However, there was some soldier that was caught in gravitational field, including Takeo Ansehelm, a private from the First Squadron of the 2nd Division. Takeo was considered highly gifted in the arts of survival amounts the alliance, he can survive a variety of harsh environment.

Takeo finds himself orbiting above an unknown sky blue planet, after such an ordeal of firsthand witnessing single-freighter warping of over millions of light-years. His airspace freighter scans for any spot with the least population for his ship to land, but instead finds there are faint singles of life forms throughout the entire planet. So, he finally lands on a small island shaped like a dragon or seahorse. He lands near an isolated forest, dozens of miles away from the nearest city. He turns on the clocking device for both his freighter and his armor suit. As he finally arrives in the nearest city, he sees nothing but entropy and carnage. He also finds a horde of people, so he spans them. But they are no life forms and their threat hostilities are moderate. He wonders as to what happened to this planet, and if there are any survivor left alive. While at the same time there is enigmatic woman, blazing red hair and blood thirsty eyes, welcoming him to Earth. Suspiciously, she managed to find him even while his clocking device is active. She calls herself, Nya. She says while grinning sinisterly, “Oh Anny, your journey is going to begin.” Will he find survivors and save Earth’s humanity from annihilation? Will he return back the alliance? Will he survive or die in the storm!?

[solidbatman]

Sounds interesting. I look forward to seeing where this goes. Good luck finding assistance on this

[Gork]

Gota say, if your looking for a VN Engine that's easy to start up with renpy is a good choice (python being a very easy to learn language)

I am trying to write my own VN engine in python but i have no idea if it will ever compare to renpy (or if ill finish it).

[Airi'sMaster11]

Gota say, if your looking for a VN Engine that's easy to start up with renpy is a good choice (python being a very easy to learn language)

I am trying to write my own VN engine in python but i have no idea if it will ever compare to renpy (or if ill finish it).

Thank you so much. This'll very be helpful

[InvertMouse]

Good luck with your project! When I was in uni I've made a few VNs, too. Back then, I made them in Flash. Of course, nowadays there are limitations. If you use Flash, you can't get the game working on the phone, etc. Still, it's an option ~

[Fujimoto Takashi]

Im not much into that theme but its always nice to read other people stories, so I wish you the best of luck Airi-san, Im really curious about your plans for this, an user made VN should be pretty interesting.