Starting a Novella for the Backstory of Black Sands

[Black Sands Entertainment]

Good day. I would love some critiques on the first part of the Prologue to Black Sands: Sons of Nibiru.

 

There has been a lot of interest in Nun and I figured I would release a Novella on my official website and then follow that up with a web series comic of it.

 

http://www.blacksandsentertainment.com/#!sons-of-nibiru/gb1qc

 

Here are some of the concepts for the Comic series ocming at a later date.

 

Hope to hear from you guys soon.