Arcadeotic Posted February 25, 2016 Posted February 25, 2016 So, because I'm a massive weeb, I've made some poems about VNs as the months went by. Some were made with a special purpose in mind, some were just seedlings of my warped brain. Anyways, here are some I made. "Engines of Today" From Ourai no Gahkthun Spoiler I hear the sound of the Engines, yet I see only black The sky is grey and the sea is black, nothing is bright anymore I can see a fortress, cutting the sky Maybe it is a beacon, maybe it can bring me hope, I don't know I prepare for the fated battle, electricity crossing in my veins I may die, I may save them all, no one is sure All they can do is hope and pray I will answer these prayers, and aid them through the darkness Corruption, greed, blackness, I will crush them all As I am the lightning, that will strike this oppression down When the Gahkthun resonates a chime, I will start my struggle With the gilded rose as my enemy, my war against the demonic bell starts now The fun thing is, that this was a poem that got me my copy of Gahkthun "Promise" from Hoshizora no Memoria Spoiler I was isolated, alone Burdened by my responsibilities, good nature My sister, she was needy, our mother, long gone Our father, he was a good man, yet abandoned us Then you came to me, white locks twirling You showed me the light, and the wonders of the stars Orihime, Hikoboshi, such a good fairytale, beautiful in its sorrow Our time together was limited, I had to bid you farewell We promised to meet, under these shinning stars I promised to return, you promised to wait Years passed, yet I didn't forget, I came back to meet at our special place Not a trace of her, only a white, young girl Reminiscing I asked her, "What are doing here?" In return, I lost sight of her, my whole world I found friends, embarked on a new life, forgotten about the most important thing I'll find you, even if it will kill me I'll even change the future, to find that old, blessed face again The girl, who seems to be a dream, I need you to bring me salvation once again I'm Orihime, I need my bridge of stars to find you, my Hikoboshi This was completely on a whim about a month after my initial playthrough of HoshiMemo. It may be little corny yes, but it still represents my love for the best and only true girl in HoshiMemo. "City of Distortions" from Sekien no Inganock Spoiler In this city of distorted sun, I saw only havoc, madness and murder Only a decade ago this city was thriving, in teh peak of its era Now all that is left is only murky, black fog I roam the streets alone Burdened by the hopes and dreams of the lowly citizens, but also the scorn I saw all of the people, suffering, needing to be saved Yet I was alone, the only one wanting to offer them salvation The upper powers, they are greedy, thieves in disguise Other citizens, they have enough problems, they don't need more Everyone is suffereing, tormented by the everlasting change Humans, turning into cats, lizards, insects... Under this damned eternal black fog, I begin my lonely journey towards something better The brightest flame, hope Made after playing about a hour of Inganock, take it with a grain of "Broken Pieces" from Grisaia no Kajitsu & Meikyuu Spoiler I was born in a broken family My father, expected too much from me My mother, never came to my rescue My sister, always taking the spotlight, never to share the pain and suffering with me In the end, My father, mother, sister all perished I was alone, oh so alone I met my Master, my only shimmering light in this world, a hope I spent many years with her, until in the end, she also perished All I inherited from her was a few words, which would later save me yet again I needed a change, a new life I am just a mere dog, fed and trained for only one purpose "School life, huh?", that would be interesting I came to this place, guarded by heavy walls, isolated from society In this prison I discovered five broken individuals, fruits To help all, or to help one, that only fate can decide I hope one of them can repair these broken pieces, repair the mirror I want to see myself again, and someone besides me The meaning behind the words left me, I hope they will aid me to Eden "Friendship" from Majikoi Spoiler I'm just a smart young man I always was tactical, thinking ahead of everyone else Years ago, I saw a young boy, wearing a red bandana I helped him build a fort, we became friends Our duo became a trio, and thereon out our circle expanded I saved a girl from suicide, I failed to save another, I still regret it to this day In the end we became a tightly-knit group of nine We had our symbol, our laughs, our fights, but in the end, we had fun Some of us found our calling, some found a new figure to follow Then years passed, we matured I saw a girl, carrying a sword, I was surprised, she seemed shy Later I met a girl riding a horse, a foreigner, a picture-perfect "princess" We become closer with these two, so much so that they joined our group of friends Nicknames were given, eccentricities were shared, but all in all life is good We have our leader, our brains, our muscle, were invincible Where will my future lead me to with this circle of close friends Shall we find out? Short poem collection Spoiler I saw a girl, suffering I'll help her find radiance, As I will for the world - Ourai no Gahkthun I returned for a promise A new tale begins Under these shining stars - Hoshizora no Memoria I had a dream, gone now Now I have returned Searching mysteries of starry night - Miagete Goran, Yozora no Hoshi o (Made before playing the VN) I'll add more poems, when I get some more done Dergonu, Zalor and gijimu 3 Quote
VirginSmasher Posted February 25, 2016 Posted February 25, 2016 I haven't played any of those VNs, but they're pretty good poems. You should make one for Majikoi or Grisaia. Dergonu 1 Quote
Arcadeotic Posted February 25, 2016 Author Posted February 25, 2016 Just now, VirginSmasher said: I haven't played any of those VNs, but they're pretty good poems. You should make one for Majikoi or Grisaia. I'll try doing that later on Quote
DarkZedge Posted February 25, 2016 Posted February 25, 2016 They're quite good poems, i liked Hoshimemo's one..Look forward to more Dergonu and Arcadeotic 2 Quote
Funyarinpa Posted February 25, 2016 Posted February 25, 2016 Roses are red My balls are blue You'll get raped And fed poop Quote
ホアー ビち Posted February 25, 2016 Posted February 25, 2016 On 2/25/2016 at 3:25 PM, Funyarinpa said: Roses are red My balls are blue You'll get raped And fed poop where is this 1 from? Quote
Funyarinpa Posted February 25, 2016 Posted February 25, 2016 Just now, ロル ビち said: where is this 1 from? euphoria Quote
Dergonu Posted February 25, 2016 Posted February 25, 2016 2 minutes ago, Funyarinpa said: euphoria Dear lord, my sides This is really cool arc. Never imagined you made poems. I don't really know anything about stuff like this, but I like them. Good job Quote
Arcadeotic Posted February 25, 2016 Author Posted February 25, 2016 Added some more poems: "City of Distortions" from Sekien no Inganock Spoiler In this city of distorted sun, I saw only havoc, madness and murder Only a decade ago this city was thriving, in teh peak of its era Now all that is left is only murky, black fog I roam the streets alone Burdened by the hopes and dreams of the lowly citizens, but also the scorn I saw all of the people, suffering, needing to be saved Yet I was alone, the only one wanting to offer them salvation The upper powers, they are greedy, thieves in disguise Other citizens, they have enough problems, they don't need more Everyone is suffereing, tormented by the everlasting change Humans, turning into cats, lizards, insects... Under this damned eternal black fog, I begin my lonely journey towards something better The brightest flame, hope Made after playing about a hour of Inganock, take it with a grain of "Broken Pieces" from Grisaia no Kajitsu & Meikyuu Spoiler I was born in a broken family My father, expected too much from me My mother, never came to my rescue My sister, always taking the spotlight, never to share the pain and suffering with me In the end, My father, mother, sister all perished I was alone, oh so alone I met my Master, my only shimmering light in this world, a hope I spent many years with her, until in the end, she also perished All I inherited from her was a few words, which would later save me yet again I needed a change, a new life I am just a mere dog, fed and trained for only one purpose "School life, huh?", that would be interesting I came to this place, guarded by heavy walls, isolated from society In this prison I discovered five broken individuals, fruits To help all, or to help one, that only fate can decide I hope one of them can repair these broken pieces, repair the mirror I want to see myself again, and someone besides me The meaning behind the words left me, I hope they will aid me to Eden "Friendship" from Majikoi Spoiler I'm just a smart young man I always was tactical, thinking ahead of everyone else Years ago, I saw a young boy, wearing a red bandana I helped him build a fort, we became friends Our duo became a trio, and thereon out our circle expanded I saved a girl from suicide, I failed to save another, I still regret it to this day In the end we became a tightly-knit group of nine We had our symbol, our laughs, our fights, but in the end, we had fun Some of us found our calling, some found a new figure to follow Then years passed, we matured I saw a girl, carrying a sword, I was surprised, she seemed shy Later I met a girl riding a horse, a foreigner, a picture-perfect "princess" We become closer with these two, so much so that they joined our group of friends Nicknames were given, eccentricities were shared, but all in all life is good We have our leader, our brains, our muscle, were invincible Where will my future lead me to with this circle of close friends Shall we find out? Quote
mitchhamilton Posted February 25, 2016 Posted February 25, 2016 goshujin-sama, i myself have come up with a poem for a vn i finished recently, which i will share now. "Neko" From nekopara Spoiler 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it was hard to think of a word that rhymes with neko but i think i did good overall. 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Arcadeotic Posted February 25, 2016 Author Posted February 25, 2016 1 minute ago, mitchhamilton said: goshujin-sama, i myself have come up with a poem for a vn i finished recently, which i will share now. "Neko" From nekopara Reveal hidden contents 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it was hard to think of a word that rhymes with neko but i think i did good overall. I'd delete this if I could Quote
mitchhamilton Posted February 25, 2016 Posted February 25, 2016 1 minute ago, Arcadeotic said: I'd delete this if I could Do..... do you not like it, goshujin-sama? took me a long time to come up with it. Arcadeotic and Dergonu 2 Quote
Arcadeotic Posted March 24, 2016 Author Posted March 24, 2016 Time to bump this thread once again with a little something, which got me an another win in a VN contest Spoiler PE starting moments chuunified I was betrayed. My father, he was rotten to the core. My mother, he left us when I was little. She was willing to take me, I said no. I needed no-one to make my way in life. With my own endurance, I withstood it all. At long last, my father left me, but his sins followed me. The shadows, they tormented me endlessly. Until one night, as I was escaping the hellish abominations, I found her She was trapped between some troops in uniforms. I couldn't see their faces, only the soulless eyes, which they glared her. I jumped between them and the girl. They were all very surprised. "Get out of the way", said the figure, dressed in uniform. "No, I have been mistreated, but I'll never let someone else suffer." The uniform figure swiped at me. I dodged, but they were everywhere. Three more followed. I was fighting a losing battle. I had no change of winning. As they pummeled me to the ground, I closed my eyes, waiting for the inevitable. As I closed my eyes, I saw a light, in the shape of a human. It had glistening, light brown hair and gentle eyes. "It's not your time yet", the gentle light said. "What do you mean? I can't possibly win", I said. "You only have to raise your hand and the way shall be cleared for you", said the hopeful light. "My hand...?" "Yes. Your hand. It's full of hope. Use it well." "My hand..." "I must go now. I hope we see again", said the radiant light, saddened. "Wait... Do i know you?" "Of course. I'll be waiting for you... Masaya..." I flinched, and my eyes sprang up. "I see, I'm still being beat to death", I thought. "Yet, I feel full of hope", I thought to myself. I steadfastly rose up and looked at the pink-haired girl, wearing a beautiful uniform. "Don't cry. I'm here today, as your savior." "Wha...?", The girl exclaimed. Then I swiftly raised my hand. ... 5 seconds passed. I saw a brilliant light. A shadow, dressed in purple, flickering like a flame. A dark purple gauntlet overlapped with my raised hand, letting out a brilliant purple flame. And behind me, a knight, made from the beautiful purple flame, stood. My eyes were full of violet light. The figures in uniform were surprised deeply. "W-What's this?" "Impossible..." They all yelled out their frustration. Then the assumed leader said this. "Even if that isn't normal, I'm sure it's just a trick. Let's advance froward to take that girl into custody." "Hm.", I said. "Girl, get behind me." The girl nodded quickly. "Now then you fiends." I triumphantly said. "Torturing an innocent girl like this. Frankly, it makes me sick." "The other me, flickering in radiant purple, I will only say you this." "In the name of righteousness, melt like the light from which you came to be." ...! It only took a second, but the purple knight in flames erupted, disintegrating the four figures in uniforms. After a slight breather. "Are you alright?", I asked the girl. "Yes, thank you for saving me." "Of course. This much was my responsibility." "Well, I must be on my way again. Good night, girl in uniform." "Wait!" "Hm?" "I've been looking for someone. Someone to help me change the academy I'm in." "Why would you want to do that?" "The academy in its entirety has been entangled by its own roots and traditions. Any sort of reform is heavily disregarded." "I see. Truth be told, my life is a major wreck. I was prepared to give it up just so you could escape." "Oh...", the girl exclaimed. "I'm sure there is a certain reason why you are asking me. Whatever that reason is, I will accept it. I'll join your academy." "Thank you very much!" The girl jumped and hugged at me, until a moment later grew self-conscious and let go. "Well, shall we?" The girl asked. "Just lead the way.", I said. "By the way..." I started. "...can you tell me your name?" "Rise." "Rise... That's a nice name." "Thank you very much. What's yours?" "Mine? Masaya." "Well, then. Masaya, let's be off." "Yeah. Let's." I followed the pink-haired girl Rise towards the academy, and towards the adventure that'd change my life for good. Quote
gijimu Posted March 25, 2016 Posted March 25, 2016 I think I will make my own poem of Gahkthun too. Spoiler A sky. A grey sky. A boundless grey sky. A boundless grey sky, even Sun's radiance can't pierce through. A boundless grey sky, trapping all kinds of radiance inside. A boundless grey sky, waiting for the radiance inside to die. A bell. A black bell. A grotesque black bell. A grotesque black bell, even humanity's radiance can't pierce through. A grotesque black bell, trapping all radiant souls inside. A grotesque black bell, waiting for the radiance inside to die. Inside this grey sky. Facing the black bell. Where radiance is being subdued. Where radiant souls are being extinguished. When all hopes and prayers seems lost into the void. When every ticks of clock hand seems too long to bear. Everyone calls him. Everyone summons him. The last bearer of humanity's undying radiance. The destined savior of radiant and mighty Lightning. His eyes, glowing with radiance unseen in humans' around him. His presence, shining with radiance as bright as Gods'. Hark, bearers of radiance. Hark, young noble ones. For you have called him. He should come to your side. Quote
DarkZedge Posted March 25, 2016 Posted March 25, 2016 Beautiful poems Arca, I'm impressed..I didn't know you could write like this. I specially loved: Friendship (Majikoi) Chuuni (PE) and Promise (Hoshimemo) I think you should keep doing things like this and personally would like to read more. Great work man I see that I already posted but now I re-read all of them and I'm posting again due to that On 2/25/2016 at 3:25 PM, Funyarinpa said: Roses are red My balls are blue You'll get raped And fed poop Also Quote
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