The Last GM Standing!

[Yuuko]

6 minutes ago, Arcadeotic said:

One question

Mitch died earlier, yet still appeared later in the chapter, even though generals will revive next week, not instantaneously

Why is this?

Because Derg forgot his own rules?  

[greenshadow622]

Fite me 1v1, kiriri! I dare you! \  /

[Arcadeotic]

5 minutes ago, Kiriririri said:

Because Derg forgot his own rules?  

Sounds like Derg alright

[Yuuko]

1 minute ago, greenshadow622 said:

Fite me 1v1, kiriri! I dare you! \  /

 

[Dergonu]

13 minutes ago, Arcadeotic said:

One question

Mitch died earlier, yet still appeared later in the chapter, even though generals will revive next week, not instantaneously

Why is this?

He was ressurected by Nosebleed

Since he was picked again the the RNG rolls, I had to bring him back right away. 

Kaguya does make a comment about it in one part

[Nebjula]

Holy shit, I actually killed someone and didn't die horribly. 

I can rest in piece, knowing that I stomped Velo into the dirt (nothing personal) and got one step higher up in the food chain.

 

[Dergonu]

@Flutterz

 

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List of currently remaining members!!

#Team Nosebleed: Members, Mitchhamilton (- 1 life) , Kiriririri - (1 life) , Satsuki , Valmore , Deep Blue (-1 life) , Nebjula , kingdomcome

#Team Down: Members, Tiagofvarela (- 1 life) , Babiker , Maxel , Fred the Barber , Nohman , Totodile , FinalChaos , Kawasumi , Flutterz , Turnip Sensei 

#Team Kaguya: Members, Dergonu , Nimbus, Gijimu, Greenshadow622 (- 1 life) , Eclipsed, Zebhra , Duyy , Jade

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Will add this to the thread and latest chapter as well

[Mr Poltroon]

1 hour ago, Arcadeotic said:

'Twas fun till it lasted

Until it lasted... What?

 

The RNG could only curse us so much... Eventually there'd be so few of us the statistics would become our ally!

[Fred the Barber]

I don't think that's how the Law of Small Numbers works.

[kingdomcome]

3 T.Nosebleed vs 3 T.Kaguya on the open field. Our whole team comes out alive.

Team Kaguya better luck next time.

Kiriri get a damn weapon.

[Yuuko]

5 minutes ago, kingdomcome said:

Kiriri get a damn weapon.

Love is the most powerful force on earth and it's most efficiently delivered through hands~ <3

 

 

[Dergonu]

Tell you what Kiri, I'll give you a stuffed loli that you can use to slap people.

[Yuuko]

Just now, Dergonu said:

Tell you what Kiri, I'll give you a stuffed loli that you can use to slap people.

Give me a stuffed loli and I will go behind a tree and gyehehehe.

 

[Zebhra]

I find it a bit ironical what first blood spilled on a team Kaguya was VirginSmasher

 

Oh and i see what you did there...now all generals have just 1 life  

 

4 hours ago, Dergonu said:

Don't worry though, we will totally come back from this!

All hail #Team Kaguya!

No worries, we are all well-trained elite soldiers...noone will fail

[Nimbus]

NO! Not Arc 

I'll avenge you my friend. I'll kill Taigo and make him suffer for it.

Then I'm finishing off Mitch. He and his cohorts will pay for their crimes against Lord Kaguya!

[mitchhamilton]

27 minutes ago, Nimbus said:

NO! Not Arc 

I'll avenge you my friend. I'll kill Taigo and make him suffer for it.

Then I'm finishing off Mitch. He and his cohorts will pay for their crimes against Lord Kaguya!

Spoiler

 

[Nimbus]

2 minutes ago, mitchhamilton said:

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[Arcadeotic]

5 hours ago, Nimbus said:

NO! Not Arc 

I'll avenge you my friend. I'll kill Taigo and make him suffer for it.

Then I'm finishing off Mitch. He and his cohorts will pay for their crimes against Lord Kaguya!

Rip me indeed

You have to finish the fight in my stead

Bring honor to my grave and to Lord Kaguya

[babiker]

Well, at least we won this RNG fiesta this time. RIP team Kaguya

Also, I feel like it was a little too long this time, I found it very hard to read every single exchange. I'd recommend you add more group fights, rather than individual or fights with only a few members, in order to shorten it. But nice writing as always~

[Mr Poltroon]

22 hours ago, Fred the Barber said:

I don't think that's how the Law of Small Numbers works.

Take these random numbers.
25 people. 10 Kaguya, 10 Down, 5 Nosebleed.

The RNG plays. It has 10/25 chance of hitting team down. This continues until it's 9/24, 8/23, 7/22, 6/21, 5/20 and so on. As more of our members fall, the less the chance we're hit again.
Kaguya's becomes 10/24, 10/23, 10/22, 10/21, 10/20.

I don't doubt I may have committed a fallacy, but I'll need you to point it out to me.

[Dergonu]

7 minutes ago, babiker said:

Well, at least we won this RNG fiesta this time. RIP team Kaguya

Also, I feel like it was a little too long this time, I found it very hard to read every single exchange. I'd recommend you add more group fights, rather than individual or fights with only a few members, in order to shorten it. But nice writing as always~

Thanks for the feedback, I am actually planning on getting a small poll out so I can figure out exactly how I should keep the structure going forward. The current chapter was just above 6k words, where as chapter 1 was 4,3k words.

Going to start writing up the questions now.

[Dergonu]

I have made a poll so that I can imrpove the structure of the fanfic for the next weeks. You can vote here:

 

[Dergonu]

Ok so I have gotten some good feedback, and I will write the next chapter with all of this in mind

If you still want to give me some feedback on the fanfic, just comment here. Oh but do make sure you do it in caps lock so it's obvious that you are mad at me for being horrible at writing. Thank you.

[Duyy]

Oh good, some of us will become girls.... Can't wait to see how that turns out.

[Zebhra]

15 hours ago, Dergonu said:

you still want to give me some feedback on the fanfic, just comment here.

TEAM NOSEBLEED IS TOO STRONK! NERF!!!!111ELEVEN

WHERE IS MAH RICHES!!

TEAM KAGUYA NEED A BIGGER CASTLE SO I COULD STUFF MORE CUTE GIRLS IN IT!

GIEF MORE CUTE GRILLS!!!11

ALL HAIL KAGUYA SAMA! \ /