Nimbus Posted April 4, 2016 Posted April 4, 2016 Hang on, some of us are going to be girls...and.. I haven't been introduced yet... Spoiler Quote
Dergonu Posted April 4, 2016 Author Posted April 4, 2016 6 minutes ago, Nimbus said: Hang on, some of us are going to be girls...and.. I haven't been introduced yet... Reveal hidden contents Quote
Nimbus Posted April 4, 2016 Posted April 4, 2016 5 minutes ago, Dergonu said: If I can keep my beard then I'm fine with it. Dergonu 1 Quote
Dergonu Posted April 7, 2016 Author Posted April 7, 2016 I have been sick the past week, so I haven't made too much progress, but I will get chapter 3 up as soon as possible. Hopefully tomorrow, but it might come out on saturday. I'll do what I can. One thing though ... THIS WEEK WILL BE EPIC! Look forward to it. babiker and kingdomcome 2 Quote
Dergonu Posted April 7, 2016 Author Posted April 7, 2016 I have taken everything you guys said into consideration, and here is a small teaser for this week's chapter, with some ... obvious new additions Spoiler "So, which one of you will be my playmate? Oh, wait! I haven't introduced myself yet, how rude." Taking a step back and bowing gracefully, the woman's hair swayed in the harsh wind. "My name is Kawasumi. It's a pleasure to meet you gentlemen. Now, I'll start by cutting up you!" Just as she finished her sentence, Kawasumi charged forward, her sickle heading for Kiriririri's neck. Kiri quickly parried the attack by charging his fist with energy and striking at the approaching weapon. .... kingdomcome, Zebhra and babiker 3 Quote
Arcadeotic Posted April 7, 2016 Posted April 7, 2016 Go and win Kawasumi! I place all of my faith on my old comrade before time Dergonu 1 Quote
kingdomcome Posted April 7, 2016 Posted April 7, 2016 3 minutes ago, Arcadeotic said: Go and win Kawasumi! Kiri's got this, fists are super effective against this specific foe. Dergonu 1 Quote
Dergonu Posted April 8, 2016 Author Posted April 8, 2016 Chapter 3 is DONE! Hope you enjoy! kingdomcome, Nebjula and Zebhra 3 Quote
Dergonu Posted April 8, 2016 Author Posted April 8, 2016 Just now, Satsuki said: Tiago too OP plz nerf 08/04/2016 Patch notes: Spoiler * Fixed a bug where Tiago was unkillable by anyone but Nayleen and Tay * Fixed a bug where Tiago's power level was over 9000 * Fixed a bug where Kawasumi had a tendency to molest corpses Totodile 1 Quote
Totodile Posted April 9, 2016 Posted April 9, 2016 Hide contents * Fixed a bug where Tiago was unkillable by anyone but Nayleen and Tay * Fixed a bug where Tiago's power level was over 9000 * Fixed a bug where Kawasumi had a tendency to molest corpses pretty sure the last one wasn't a bug. Quote
Nimbus Posted April 9, 2016 Posted April 9, 2016 Nimbus arrives and kicks ass! I hope you realize that by saving your life I have also made you my servant, Jade. Quote
Zebhra Posted April 9, 2016 Posted April 9, 2016 Fisted to death by Kiri What trickery is this?! \ / Dergonu and kingdomcome 2 Quote
Arcadeotic Posted April 9, 2016 Posted April 9, 2016 Nohman and Kawasumi's personalities were pretty delicious, especially Kawasumi's Please, do nerf Tiago Seems that Team Down's RNG has turned completely Quote
Jade Posted April 9, 2016 Posted April 9, 2016 7 hours ago, Nimbus said: Nimbus arrives and kicks ass! I hope you realize that by saving your life I have also made you my servant, Jade. "- In seconds, Nimbus' barrier shattered, and he had no way to stop the cleaver. Just as Nohman lifted his weapon in order to finish off his victim, Jade fired several knives made of shadow at him." Did you say something ? 14 hours ago, Kiriririri said: 1v1 me noobs Iri you noobs Quote
Fred the Barber Posted April 9, 2016 Posted April 9, 2016 8 hours ago, Arcadeotic said: Seems that Team Down's RNG has turned completely Never underestimate the power of bribery. Quote
kingdomcome Posted April 10, 2016 Posted April 10, 2016 Dergonu, this was your best writing yet. Fantastic job, but I think there's a problem with #Team Nosebleed's RNG Dergonu 1 Quote
Dergonu Posted April 14, 2016 Author Posted April 14, 2016 Been a little bit busy with my schoolwork and the Tsui Yuri translation, but I'll do my best to get the chapter up on time tomorrow. Worst case, it might be up on saturday, but hopefully I'll manage to finish it on friday. Like I did last week, here is a small teaser: Spoiler The man was holding a blood stained katana. His green garb was also showered in fresh blood. The dead man at his feet was headless, and the woman lying a few feet away was submerged in a great pool of blood. The man turned his head towards Eclipsed and stared right at him. "Tch..." Eclipsed clicked his tongue over being discovered. It had been such a great opportunity to perform a surprise attack. But it did not matter. Eclipsed did not waver and kept on approaching his enemy, Tiagofvarela... .... .... Upon hearing his opponent chanting, Tiago launched an attack, but Eclipsed's body was enveloped in a vortex of fire just as the blade was about to connect. The katana bounced of the flames as if they were solid, and a deep red flame started burning though the metal. kingdomcome 1 Quote
Dergonu Posted April 15, 2016 Author Posted April 15, 2016 Finally finished chapter 4! It's currently 0:30 here, so I was kind of tired and sleepy when I edited this. I hope there are no huge mistakes in there. Anyways, this week came out at about 3,9k words. Enjoy. kingdomcome 1 Quote
gijimu Posted April 16, 2016 Posted April 16, 2016 So I am a martial artist now.. It would be cool if I can do chuuni-titled-ryu technique, like Kawakami-ryu, Star Obliterator! And the amount of members is about half than original. The battle is halfway over. Quote
Zebhra Posted April 17, 2016 Posted April 17, 2016 RIPpu Team Down lost their general..the victory is almost ours! So...jimu is a fist fighter too......you go get that fisting Kiriri now! Avenge me! Quote
Arcadeotic Posted April 17, 2016 Posted April 17, 2016 Hey, Tiago the ultimate sword wielder dedded And I guess gijimu was kinda neat ...I guess Quote
Dergonu Posted April 17, 2016 Author Posted April 17, 2016 2 minutes ago, Arcadeotic said: Hey, Tiago the ultimate sword wielder dedded And I guess gijimu was kinda neat ...I guess You have been avenged Oh and don't worry, your spin-off will happen Quote
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