Rainbow Dreams[KN][BxG][Psychological, romance,sorrow]

[dfbreezy]

Rainbow Dreams is a Sorrow and Despair themed visual novel that has a total playtime of 3-4 hours.

https://vndb.org/v20128

Summary:

part 1
Luka wakes up one morning to find a beautiful girl beside him and she claims to be a forest fairy! How is Luka going to deal with Myra's variety of troubles when she refuses to go back home and rule the world?

part 2
The world is tearing at it's seams. People are being returned to nothingness. And Myra Orbis, the only person who can stop it has gone missing for three months. Luka Sanguis sets out on a journey to find Myra and Hopefully save the world in the process.

Characters:

Luka Sanguis- A very handsome young man who is apathetic to most things even though he possesses a genius-level intellect. His apathy was caused by the frequent abuse he suffered from his foster parents during his childhood.

Bora Sanguis- The foster father of Luka and a very important politician. He is very hardworking and secretly cares for Luka but is unable to show it because of his wife. he has a weakness for Myra.

Mara Sanguis- The foster mother of Luka and a very prominent woman in the real estate business. She despises Luka because of his great achievements while her son was born with down syndrome of a strange nature. 

Tika Sanguis- Luka's younger brother who is disabled and cannot do much on his own. Luka tends to spoil him while their parents are not looking. 

Lara- the second in command of the forest fairies and Myra's retainer. for some reason, she and Luka have never seen eye to eye.

Team:

Writing: Dfbreezy
Editing/proofreading: TheGreatTheorist
Programming: Joe B.
Character art: Eccopink
Composing: Lexikins
Interface and Logo: Valhalla
Background art: FalyneVerger

Progress;

Story;
Part one: 100%
Part two: 100%

Art;
Character design: 20% ( 50% of demo)
sprites:35% (50% of demo)
Backgrounds: 16% (40% of demo)
CGs: 0%
Gui: 35%

Music: 38% (100% of demo)

Programming: 5% (90% of demo)

Sample BGs:

More backgrounds coming soon!

Open Positions;

Japanese translators*
Japanese Voice actors*

*Not actively recruiting

1. Rate the premise on a scale of 1- 10
2. This story is very symbolic and has alot of deeper elements that may be unnoticeable to a light reader. How do you feel about that?
3. What do you think of the plot in general? The plot may seem generic, but i plan to make the story one that will leave deep emotional scars.

Any opinion will be much obliged.

Edited November 18, 2016 by dfbreezy

[EastCoastDrifter]

Are you making this? If so, you peaked my interest.

Edited November 18, 2016 by KonpekiUmi

[dfbreezy]

32 minutes ago, KonpekiUmi said:

Are you making this? If so, you peaked my interest.

Yes, I am the one making this. 

[DarkZedge]

Not too bad, based on the little information provided I'd say it could interest me, that being said I do like the design for Myra.

 

Premise: 7/10 (can get higher or lower as more details become known)

 

Best of luck with your project though