Ibitz Posted October 30, 2017 Posted October 30, 2017 (edited) Edited November 1, 2021 by Ibitz Don't want to list my game anymore Quote
Ibitz Posted November 10, 2017 Author Posted November 10, 2017 (edited) Also, a friend of mine has begun a Let's Play for my demo! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0q_xkenjCYk Edited November 1, 2021 by Ibitz Don't want to list my game anymore Quote
Plk_Lesiak Posted November 11, 2017 Posted November 11, 2017 Well, the plot description made me chuckle a few times (like "picking berries for dessert"), it might not reflect the actual story, but the phrasing made it sound super-cliched. I would leave it more vague in future (same goes to character descriptions - they spoil a lot), because things like the said berry picking and sudden appearence of "assassins" make it sound a bit silly, while also revealing a bit too much of the plot. It's better when it gives the potencial player a general feel of the story, but details of it come as a surprise. But that's just a minor thing, with the amount of content described it actually looks quite ambitious. How long do you think it will be (in reading time) when you're finished? Quote
Ibitz Posted November 21, 2017 Author Posted November 21, 2017 (edited) On 11/11/2017 at 1:53 AM, Plk_Lesiak said: Well, the plot description made me chuckle a few times (like "picking berries for dessert"), it might not reflect the actual story, but the phrasing made it sound super-cliched. I would leave it more vague in future (same goes to character descriptions - they spoil a lot), because things like the said berry picking and sudden appearence of "assassins" make it sound a bit silly, while also revealing a bit too much of the plot. It's better when it gives the potencial player a general feel of the story, but details of it come as a surprise. But that's just a minor thing, with the amount of content described it actually looks quite ambitious. How long do you think it will be (in reading time) when you're finished? Thank you for the critique on my description. I was definitely struggling with trying to make a good description for my game. I really appreciate the feedback and will try working on a better description. Edited November 1, 2021 by Ibitz Don't want to list my game anymore Quote
Ibitz Posted December 20, 2017 Author Posted December 20, 2017 (edited) HolyMolyCrowley has made my first piece of fanart for my game. Check it out! Edited November 1, 2021 by Ibitz Don't want to list my game anymore Quote
Ibitz Posted January 3, 2018 Author Posted January 3, 2018 Super nervous! Someone is live streaming my game right now:https://www.twitch.tv/neftato Quote
Ibitz Posted June 7, 2018 Author Posted June 7, 2018 (edited) Yay! More Fanart! Edited November 1, 2021 by Ibitz Don't want to list my game anymore Quote
Ibitz Posted February 10, 2019 Author Posted February 10, 2019 (edited) Also, Woot! Even more Fanart! (just discovered this one, even though its from December 2017) Edited November 1, 2021 by Ibitz Don't want to list my game anymore Quote
Ibitz Posted November 1, 2020 Author Posted November 1, 2020 (edited) NEW CHARACTER/FAN ART Edited November 1, 2021 by Ibitz Don't want to list my game anymore Quote
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