Uploaded My First Visual Novel Concept Video!

[freyamakes]

Hey everyone! I’m relatively new to the whole world of visual novel games, but I’ve recently picked up the daunting task of making my own. 

https://youtu.be/1E_4eC8S2Eo

What do you guys think so far? I’d appreciate any feedback at all ^^

[MDruidd]

34 minutes ago, freyamakes said:

Hey everyone! I’m relatively new to the whole world of visual novel games, but I’ve recently picked up the daunting task of making my own. 

https://youtu.be/1E_4eC8S2Eo

What do you guys think so far? I’d appreciate any feedback at all ^^

i think your concept is good, seems unique. The opening game also good and looks simple, having a match backgound sound for a horror game, but maybe you can adding some sound effect like glass break or stuff like that.
for the characters, i think you need improve to be more unique, the 2nd characters too normal for lost soul's like there is no bad background for her death.
for the game effect of shaking characters when no event coming, ain't agree ( when the choice coming)

sorry if I sassy or hurt you, anyway, goodwork

[freyamakes]

12 minutes ago, MDruidd said:

i think your concept is good, seems unique. The opening game also good and looks simple, having a match backgound sound for a horror game, but maybe you can adding some sound effect like glass break or stuff like that.
for the characters, i think you need improve to be more unique, the 2nd characters too normal for lost soul's like there is no bad background for her death.
for the game effect of shaking characters when no event coming, ain't agree ( when the choice coming)

sorry if I sassy or hurt you, anyway, goodwork

Thank you for the feedback! I'm still trying to polish the artwork and gameplay mechanics, so I'll definitely take that into consideration. This was just a demo so all the details about her death will be revealed!