Robotic's Notes Review

[Giki190]

http://colemantimes.blogspot.com/2013/12/robotics-notes-review-1010.html

Hey that was my first review so can you guys give me your genuine thoughts on it sorry if it feel like i'm only advertising I really want input

[Okami]

One small suggestion, the last part about your favorite anime of all time and about the explanation about VNs isn't needed in review about anime that doesn't have to do anything with them.. Also you might want to try to sort out things a little batter.