Sakura Spirit original VN by MangaGamer, Sekai Project and Winged Cloud

[Darklord Rooke]

"We mention this because the game does, in fact, read as if it has been translated — by folks who don’t have a profound grasp on the English language. We found this to be an off-putting part of the experience, especially because the entire game is made up of reading. When the core, and really the only, aspect of your game isn’t delivered coherently, there’s a big issue. Now, as we were about to type up our initial review we did receive an e-mail from the devs mentioning that a patch has been released to address this issue. So, in good conscience, we went back to the story to see what had changed. Fortunately, some of the grammatical snafus were addressed in the update, which definitely makes the whole thing a bit more fluid. It still doesn’t negate the errors and poor wording outright, but at least the effort counts for something."

 

http://www.hardcoregamer.com/2014/07/24/review-sakura-spirit/95183/

 

Sounds about right.