YouTube video - Constructive criticism

[bl3u]

Hey sexy fuwans. I made a video.
 
 
This was my first ever fully scripted, edited, recorded, ect video. So I've been going around asking people how I did in terms of production quality and whatnot.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fJy-Nf7fg28
 
Admittedly, when I watch the video I sometimes find myself a bit boring and monotone. But that's what I've noticed, What have you noticed? Point it out, and please. Be as critical as possible, I want to improve so tear my video apart.

[Yatsufusa]

To be honest, you did a great job at making this review work imo. Your voice does come off as little bit flat, but personally, i like the way it sounds. It gives the review a welcome air of professionalism, which complements your reasonably precise and detailed breakdown of the game.

I liked the production too, your style sort of reminds me of Gigguk and HoldenReviews which made the review all the more pleasing to the eyes and ears.

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Overall, i didn't see much errors in the review. Either that or i'm just incompetent at constructive criticism lol. That said, keep up the good work. I would definitely watch more of your video reviews if you plan on releasing more.