I said it before, but the writing isn't for everyone- in a good and bad sense. I, personally, really enjoyed the way this game was written. The repetition is used to evoke the same feelings the phrase did in previous scenes, which is a technique I'm fond of. It's written differently, which is great when you read a bunch of VNs, specially translated ones, where writing style is often lost.
I also disagree on the minigames- I thought they were meaningless and overall not fun... I'd rather have more narrative. I would give this game a better rating if it didn't have them.
If we keep this pace up, it'll get 8~9 pages. That's pretty good, actually.