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unfortunately is says it's either expired or i don't have permission, so could you re-upload please?

yes if i add the h-scenes, the protag will comment about it later on in his narration. so it will be obvious that something will be taken out. also the h-scenes will be spontaneous so adding a flag will be difficult. most of them will be in the common route too if they are added and only one or two in each route. i have faith in my ability to write ero scenes but my problem is probably on a commercial and moral level. also i heard the steam greenlight doesn't take material with porn in it.

thanks. i also don't prefer video chatting and would prefer text. twitter or Imessage is cool.

your help will me much obliged as i need assistance with the specific routes for the other four heroine's apart from the main one. i'm still working on the common route up to the 1st branching point. currently i'd like a sample of your writing. i need more Arin/Kairi moments in school so if you could write up a sample scene for me to look over i'm sure we'd get something done.

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they would technically fit the story if they were added more than without but this is my first story so i don't know how good it will be. i can only write based on my own experiences . most of the choices are in the battle scenes though. the protag 'experiences' the heroine fully then makes a single choice which decides whether you branch off into her route or continue with the main story. like g-senjou no maou after branching the main story ends and the protag is the kinda guy who doesn't hesitate to get naughty so such scenes too will fit his character.

i need to find that guy. he is my soulmate.... and i probably could use his help with my project

nice art . are you the one who made that?

yeah especially Maou-sama

thanks for the tips guys. will try recruiting an indie team and see what happens.

so guys I've gotten some plans down for my own visual novel and I've already prepared a sample. that is the prologue and part one of the story but i don't know hot to program or draw or compose. writings all i'm good for and i don't really want to recruit unless there's absolutely no other choice so i was thinking i hit up few of the big wig visual novel companies like key or nitroplus, show them my sample and see what happens. good idea or nah? if not what the best course of action?

i see thanks for the view! i'll try and cut of most of the details that seem irrelevant.

oh it's notan rpg though. its a normal vn with thick battle narration.

your art is great man. i'd probably like you to do some art for a vn i'm trying to make.

5 heroines not too many choices since it's my first try. basically it has alot battle scenes since the protag and all his girls are combat capable. so i'll need help doing that. the protag is very pragmatic so he'll make his own choices and reason them out at certain scenes but the choice points will come at the emotional scenes since he'll need help with that. the choices will be very realistic so that readers will be able to match that choices with real life decisions.

i'll post the first 5 chapters when i finish.

I haven't really developed on it yet but its about a world were human dna was rewritten by a mass of cosmic radiation and various factions developed possesing different abilities. the protag is from a faction that can "emulate" any other factions abilities so his faction is most sought after. they were all slaughtered by the non-power faction and his childhood friend aria was taken away. the sory continues 5 years later when he has blended in to the non-power faction's state to get revenge. this just a rough summary. typing all the details will give me blisters.

So guys what are your top ten bgm lists for vns? mine is; 10- 9- 8- 7- 6- 5- 4- 3- 2- 1- so what do you guys think? what are your top ten lists?

Hello guys, i'm new here and i just wanted to get my name out there. i'm also in progress of writing a story for a vn but i need help for the creation process e.g art , music, programming etc.