Early feedback [original artwork]

[pnadadeath]

Hi.  I have been working on a visual novel.  I'm not an artist though and unfortunately do have any money to hire an artist so I am a bit stuck having to do the art myself.  I decided to go with rendering scenes with three models and was hoping to get an idea if the artwork is passable or not.  However, I can't figured out how to put the pictures in the post.  Sorry (believe me, I know it is stupid and I only have myself to blame, but the only thing I can do is apologise for the inconvenience, and I do know that there is a simple solution, sorry again).  I put in a link (http://pandadeath.com/annes-book) (I really don't know if that is against some kind of internet protocol manners, if it is then I am sorry for that and maybe one day will figure out how to put the picture in the post.  

Thanks.

[pual]

it reminds me of Grim Fandango.

[pnadadeath]

I have since made some less sack-puppet looking people.