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To note regarding plays, there are plays that were primarily designed to be read, not acted: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Closet_drama. In fact, the moderately well known Faust was originally written as one.

Muv-Luv Unlimited: The Day After is out on Steam, but it is quite expensive and they sell each part separately. Maybe there will be a discount during the seasonal sales. Another problem is the font size. I have no idea why they didn't stick to the one that was in MLA.

No we're still missing the mini-nukige spin-off, IMHO nothing worth of attention, tho.

At first glance, a puppet play feels like a good analogy for an average VN... I can't help to think of it primarily from the perspective of the writing process, but let's assume for now that the analogy works both ways. Writing a puppet play doesn't seem that distinct from writing a "real" one, but it forces you to compensate for additional limitations. Less in expressiveness of the characters and more in their capability to actually do things and present complex events to the audience. You have to rely more on narration (which you shouldn't overdo to not kill the pacing) and dialogue, as you're heavily limited in stuff that can be genuinely shown. Even the static backgrounds and many CGs are more like scenography that characters build the narrative over, populating them with people and action that would be too cumbersome to visually place there. But then, it would be easy to argue this whole comparison is a fallacy, as you basically never get a VN read to you in full. Which makes it a primarily literary experience, but also a multimedia one that can neither be directly compared to reading a play nor to watching one. This makes comic books a more reasonable point of reference, but I feel like they operate with a completely opposite set of limitations. You can show a lot in them, despite the missing links between scenes that the reader has to fill with his imagination, but you can't tell much without bloating it with text. So, ultimately I'd land in a similar place as Clephas – the closest analogue to VN, from the perspective of the reader, is probably a Light Novel, with a bit of puppet play mixed in.

I think I have really high standards when it comes to purple prose. I want it to be tight as fuck, or it just makes me cringe ever so slightly. Overall, it just felt a lot like jamming unusual words where they did not quite fit, rather than using them as a valid alternative to something more pedestrian. There are also some more consistent phrasing issues like lack of commas, a fair bunch of inexplicable semicolons that should be colons or changed to something else, &c. I'm half inclined to actually try to edit this, though who knows if I'd complete anything. The sections that IMO need the most attention aren't that long, so it's at least plausible. I will say, the typo in this one definitely didn't help me take it seriously. (I would instinctively go for a word that actually works with the physical image of a root, such a severed — though really, it would be cool to rephrase it like idk... Longing is easier to manage once its origin has been safely divorced from your reality.)

[Majikoi] Ooookay, I just finished Mayucchi's route! Oh... WOW. This route was good, very good! I really liked the pacing for this one~ Now, my pals said the downside of this route is the romance - or the lack of thereof. Personally, I felt it was fine. I didn't miss it. Actually, I felt really awkward reading those scenes, like I was a third wheel or something lol Maybe it's because (as I mentioned before in my spoiler-tagged commentary) I'm aroace, but I really could do without Yamato's comments. I don't know, I guess I just feel weird because everyone is so friggin' horny all the damn time, oof- Wanko and Capt are the only ones I can feel comfy around ------- Awwwwrighty! Next one is Momoyo, and then there's only the sub routes and the true ending left!

...is this purposely written with a lot of typos and general fuckiness? The vibe a few screens in is good, the prose not so much EDIT: well, I got 1/1 ends, I guess The prose gets better once you stop trying to be pretentious, though there are stil la few pain points probably partly caused by a lack of proofreading. The atmosphere is great, and I appreciated the history-of-vns part of it (it's certainly nostalgic to see titles I too have played...). The presentation is great, so my only real complaint is the unpolished writing.