Thanks for the feedback. I'm still trying to find an ideal pace. I do want to speak quickly but the tricky part there is not speaking too quickly. Something I apparently still need to work on, so thank you for that.
As for the second part, sorry if you disagreed but I was just trying to make a point of comparison but the only anime still really relevant and popular that I'm not too big on is SAO. Though I have yet to watch the second season so maybe it got better. This is also why the image I used to represent SAO was of season 1. It may not seem fully relevant but I think it related to the idea I was talking about leading into the actual review. And if it means anything I never explicitly said SAO was bad (Though I think it has a lot of problems) Just that popular anime doesn't have to mean good anime. If that bothered you then again, sorry.
Thanks to everyone for the feedback so far though. It really does mean a lot.