Anyone a good writer?

[Naoe]

I wrote a bit of something for a VN i'm doing.

Before I even continue. I would like someone to take a look at it.

Tell what I could improve and stuff like that.

I'll send a message to you with a doc link to my script.

[Kaguya]

I'm by no means a good writer, but I could take a look at it. 

[Makudomi]

Indie VN devs 'gotta stick together. Send it over if you want.

[Dionysus42]

Also send me a copy if you'd like.

[URV]

I certainly wouldn't consider myself a good writer, given that I hardly ever succeed at writing more than a few pages. Regardless, I do enjoy providing feedback, whether it is related to grammar, writing style or the story itself. I'd be interested in taking a look as well, if that's alright.