Oelvn feedback request-free game

[Chemsem]

https://chemsem.itch.io/huehuecoyotl-can-we-see-each-other-again-after-i-die
 

hello everyone. I’m currently developing an oelvn (also as a light novel on tapas) and I would like to ask the community for their input. I’m thick skinned and need honest feedback. Game is free. I hope you can take a look. Thanks

-Chemsem