Dergonu

I have made a poll so that I can imrpove the structure of the fanfic for the next weeks. You can vote here:

It has been 2 weeks now, and I have a few questions for you guys about the structure of this fanfic. I want to make it as enjoyable as possible, so it would be great to get a little bit of feedback directly from you. If you don't really find what you want improved in the poll, you can go ahead and write a comment below with suggested changes, or you can list things you don't like or things you DO like. Any feedback is appriciated, be it constructive critisism or praising. (For the record, buttering me up will not increase your chances of suriviving ) Currently we have 29 warriors left (counting the clones from team Nosebleed) , as well as the three commanders.

Thanks for the feedback, I am actually planning on getting a small poll out so I can figure out exactly how I should keep the structure going forward. The current chapter was just above 6k words, where as chapter 1 was 4,3k words. Going to start writing up the questions now.

Yes! I love the voice actors. Nana-chan <3 Haven't gotten too far myself, but first impression: this is fucking epic. The atomsphere in the start of the game is so creepy and dark, which I really liked. Then you get a really badass fight quite early on and while they are fighting you hear Lillith making these hilarious comments. (Lillith, I love you already.) Pretty much a perfect introduction to the game. Hopefully it keeps going like this. The race is on Eclipsed

Nosebleed has said he will do it, so yes. (All hail Nosebleed-sama, the translator of moe yuri and loli games ) Lova yah Nosebleed <3

Well guess that is something then.

I haven't read this, so I can't comment on the TL quality of the fan translation, but seeing as the official release is going to be by Sekai Project, it will have to be a judgement call on your end. If we look at previous releases from Sekai Project, they do tend to re-use fan translations, (like in G-senjou no maou; I literally found one singular line that was changed, that's it.) Though they do bring some other improvements for certain titles, like HD upscaling, (though they did also crop the CG in that case.) When they released Clannad they did improve the translation somewhat, so the chance of it happening for this is there, but seeing as the ETA is 2016 for this title, they wont really give themselves too much time, so I would imagine this will simply be an official release of the fan translation. Also, Sekai Project tends to release all ages versions of eroge, so there is also a chance of this simply having the 18+ content cut out. Of course, it could be that I am mistaken. Again, comes down to a judgement call on your end to be honest. (By the way, don't take this as a comment bashing on SP, I am simply stating some facts here, I do not at all have anything against SP as a company.)

Ended up with this error myself, so thanks

Hey, welcome to the forum, nice to meet you! If you are just starting out, I recommend going over to the recommendation section and looking at some of the stickies and the threads already there. For example this thread is a god place to start.

Well shit. I mean, posting a comment like that on april 1st, what do you expect. Damn, good luck on whatever it is you are doing, you will be missed. Don't have a serious avatar, the first one I linked was just a troll, sorry

Ahhh don't mention it. Just doing my part Well this is quite awesome. @Nosebleed, if you need any moral support during your translation, feel free to pm me and I'll link you memes or something

Tell you what Kiri, I'll give you a stuffed loli that you can use to slap people.

It's ... Eh... It's .... You know... That guy!

Well like, for real or april fools? You aren't really leaving us, are you?

Because PMs are for noobs

Ok ok, I will believe really hard! HNNNNNNNNGGG!

havent played them yet, but from looking at the store page of each one, if you arent a nukige fan, I doubt these titles will change your mind Armored warrior Iris looks pretty good, and 10$ IS less than the price of that game alone, so maybe. I'd say its a judgement call.

日本語は最高です

Well I already know enough to read this untranslated, but when given the choice, I pick English DEMON!

Yes you can either redeem it yourself, or make a permalink you can give away.

I see what you did there Huh, another one of these. I am not ashamed to say, I will get this one too "Suck my dick or die". Pure gold

I know. I'm so gullible

I am not going to lie, I was actually a little bit hopeful. I was like, "Ok, he said he would release it on april 1st. That means it's such an obvious troll, it might be on purpose! Maybe he just wants to really suprise us all! Like, hah, no one believed me but here it is!" Yeah RIP.

@Flutterz __________________________________________________________________________________ List of currently remaining members!! #Team Nosebleed: Members, Mitchhamilton (- 1 life) , Kiriririri - (1 life) , Satsuki , Valmore , Deep Blue (-1 life) , Nebjula , kingdomcome #Team Down: Members, Tiagofvarela (- 1 life) , Babiker , Maxel , Fred the Barber , Nohman , Totodile , FinalChaos , Kawasumi , Flutterz , Turnip Sensei #Team Kaguya: Members, Dergonu , Nimbus, Gijimu, Greenshadow622 (- 1 life) , Eclipsed, Zebhra , Duyy , Jade __________________________________________________________________________________ Will add this to the thread and latest chapter as well