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As far as mystery goes I think it still should have compelling characters and plot. I think it's all a matter of how obvious it is. Like, if the game spends most of the time basically telling me who the bad guy is or what the twist is going to be then that is not much of a mystery. Still, if the writing and characters are really well done then I will still probably like it. I genuinely do love being surprised by things and I am always appreciative of an author that can take something in a direction that I wasn't expecting. What I don't like are twists that are completely absurd and have literally no foreshadowing at all. Don't give me a twist a la R.L. Stine (they were robots, dogs, or aliens the entire time) and expect me to just be satisfied with that. I would be fine with a more open ending as long as I don't feel cheated at the end of it. Conversely, I don't like it when a story spends it's last hour explaining each and every conceivable plot point. So, if the mystery can avoid doing either of those things then I will be happy. I think a lot of the time they are just unavoidable sometimes, especially if you have prior experience. I'm fine with them as long as they are subtle enough and don't end up looking like this.

Hopefully it's something that I'd actually would like to play. Oh I actually remembered something, Boku no Hitori Sensou! Please! Please!

I don't know man give it a try and see how it goes...if it works for you then cool, but if not? Then that's alright as well.

Come on this is me you're talking about of course this is going to be hella yuri! Maybe, possibly, who knows? I know but do you know? Yeah probably, I like to think that I did my part to help you along the correct path.

School Days at 10 huh? Kids these days they grow up way too fast. Anyway, welcome to Fuwa I hope you have a interesting time.

Here's another one of me...YOUR WELCOME, YOUR ALL WELCOME!!

How about now? I probably should have done that in the beginning, sorry about that.

Got to get in on that muscle sensation! Plus irl I'd totally have gone gay for Teddy Pendegrass Or Marc Bolan

I'm surprised you havn't reviewed this already. Yeah I thought it was a good yuri game and I think if you are going to handle incest (I'm not a fan) then this is probably the best way. The one major problem I had with this game is that there are too many times when characters would just cold show up out of nowhere. It happened at least four times.

Here is something that I just decided to randomly work on. It might end up being a Visual Novel who knows. Oh here is my working synopsis. After years of living a unremarkable high school life, eighteen year old Alice has finally started on her College journey. It's a fresh start in a new city. A chance encounter with a bully from her youth has awakened something within her. Now, determined to make the most of her college days and to crush her newfound rival, Alice has decided to form a rock band that can win the battle of the bands competition. All she has to do now is actually get a band together that can win, but that shouldn't be that hard, right? Anyway let me know what you think. Chapter One, a Fresh Start and a Old Enemy "Goodbye, Mom! Goodbye, Dad! Oh and how could I forget, goodbye Beth! I love you all!" I shout that to my family as they give me a departing wave before getting into their car and driving away from my life forever. Well, maybe not forever but it does kind of feel that way. At least, that's how my mother and sister felt. I could scarcely pull away from their death grip on me. My father, he is made of sterner stuff but I know that he was probably feeling the same thing on the inside. I was sad too of course, but it wasn't nearly enough to combat the fierce joy I felt. I'm finally at college! I'm finally on my own! I want to scream that so everyone will hear. That might not make for a good first impression, so I control my joy and simply let it radiate through me. I look around the crowded parking lot filled with newly minted college students accompanied by their grieving but proud parents. Of course, I think to myself as I walk back inside my new dorms, it won't be like I'll be completely on my own. I'll have my very own roommate after all. I wonder what she'll be like and look like? I only briefly emailed her several days ago. She seemed nice enough but who knows, she might be that roommate from hell I've heard so many horror stories about. Now that I think about it I could end up becoming the thing I fear. I shake off the chill that I just gave me and head toward my room. Like that's going to happen, I'm going to be the best roommate that she could hope to have. I grit my teeth and clench my fist in what I hope is a look of supreme determination. I open the door wide and cross the threshold before throwing myself into my bed and gazing up at the room I'll be living in for the rest of the year. It's not much to be honest though I did manage to bring a lot of my precious things with me. Especially my old electric guitar that my grandmother bought for me at the end of eighth grade. I glance over at the bare part of the room with the single destitute bed and lonely desk and chair. I'm surprised that she hasn't already moved in yet. Oh well, I guess there is always tomorrow. It's still a little disappointing. "Oh well." I murmur again to myself. I pull myself out of my bed and get to work putting up the rest of my posters and other nick knacks followed by my favorite mirror. After that is completed I spend several minutes gazing back at the young woman who is staring intently at me through the glass. She has long thick messy black hair, bright green eyes and thick eyebrows that always give her a threatening look, even if it's not always her intention. She's pretty enough I suppose if you are into that kind of thing. She'd probably only piss me off if I had to live with her. I sing softly to myself, Spent some time feelin' inferior, standing in front of my mirror. Combed my hair in a thousand ways, but I came out looking just the same. I turn myself away from the mirror and head out the door. I can't spend all day in my little hovel, I've got some exploring to do! There is commotion in the hallways, commotion in the corridors, commotion all around me. I have to duck and weave in order to save myself from being hit by the constantly apologetic families who are in the middle of moving. I give a small smile of understanding to them knowing that I was in their own shoes myself not an hour ago. The dorm I live in is nice enough even if it is fairly old. It's got a pretty nice common room with a big flat screen tv and a ping pong and pool table which is already in use. The only bad thing about it is a bit of a walk to the campus. That's fine for me as it will give me a good opportunity to get some exercise. I nod and say hello to a couple of the friendly faces that I come across as I walk out of the dorms and head toward the campus. I love this campus already, of course I had to given that I fought so hard to get into it. It wasn't easy due to the fact that I was a pretty shit student all the way through high school. What were the nicer words that the teachers used, oh it was, "Does not apply herself." Still by hook or by crook I managed to somehow get into it and now here I am. "Now here I am," I whisper to myself. "The future is right ahead of me and there is no one here alive that will be able to stop me from seizing it!" I walk languidly down the path ahead of me thanking the powers that be that this hot August day is not intolerable. I take out my music player, put it in shuffle and put the earbuds where they belong. Today seems to be my day as a song that I adore starts to play. This is really a beautiful campus, I think to myself as I saunter along taking in the open space surrounded by concrete buildings with a few small gardens clustered around. It's eerily quiet as there are only a few people that evidently had the same motivation as I. It's hard to imagine that tomorrow this relatively empty area is going to pulsating with life. The only problem with it being so large is that I'll be a sweaty mess once I get to class, especially if I must rush. I adjust my gait to the music that is coursing throughout me. Boy, I hope I look as cool as I feel right now. I smile smugly to myself as my favorite song comes to a close. The next song of course has to be a complete mood killer, a tearful dirge to a lost love. Just my luck. This song just has to play enforcing the sad truth that in all my eighteen years of age I have not yet found someone who could pierce me to my core like that. I hurriedly push those annoying thoughts out of my brain. Still plenty of time to fall in love, still plenty of time to fall in love, I chant to myself. I skip through my playlist trying to find a better song as I take a sharp corner, right into destiny. I collide with someone coming from the opposite direction. My head slams into theirs and I fall back on the hard stone floor. "OW! MY ACHING HEAD! OW! MY FUCKING ASS," I shout as I reel from the impact. I hear a grown from the other person and I snap into apology mode. "I'm so sorry I ran into you, I hope you aren't hurt." "I'll survive somehow but thanks," comes the reply. I finally bring myself to look at the person I just collided with and I notice that she is a girl about my age. She has short, spiky white hair with black streaks. She is dressed in a very punk way with a skull t shirt and a tattered skirt. She looks back at me with gray eyes that are a bit dazed. She's pretty cute but she looks awfully familiar. I pick myself up off the floor and remembering what passes for manners I offer my hand to her. She wordlessly takes it and I pull her up. "I'm sorry again for that reinforced cliches are the worst." Yeah, I guess that counts as one doesn't it? We are standing face to face now and the more I look at her the more familiar she becomes. All the while I'm staring at her something is building in me. I can almost hear the sounds of a hundred pulsating drums. I know this woman's face, but from where? Then suddenly it's like a steel door to my memories has suddenly snapped open. Meanwhile, the woman is looking quizzically at me while trying to break my death grip on her hand. I quickly release her hand and instead point an accusing finger at the woman. A name that I never thought I had the chance to say bursts from my lips. VVVERONICA FRENCH!! She looks quite taken aback at this sudden happening and slowly asks, eyes narrowed. "How do you know my name?" I match her glare with one of my own putting my heavy brows to good use. "How could I ever forget your name when it is stitched to the lining of my Soul!" She looks at me like I'm some kind of mental patient which at this case might not actually be so far from the truth if I'm being honest. "What the fuck are you talking about?" "You don't remember me at all do you? You don't remember this face? Does the name Alice Blackwood mean anything to you?" "No, I don't believe I've ever met you at anytime in my life. I think someone as strange as you would be a hard person to forget." "Hard doesn't mean impossible. You went to Sarajevo Middle School did you not?" "Yes. Yes I did but how did you...?" "How did I know? Because we went to the same exact middle school of course!" My heart is pounding fast and the drums are pulsating awaiting the grand climax that is approaching. I again point my finger accusingly and savagely shout. "I COULD NEVER FORGET YOUR NAME OR FACE BECAUSE YOU WERE THE ONE WHO MADE MY MIDDLE SCHOOL YEARS A LIVING HELL!" "You bullied and teased me constantly how could I not remember? That sort of thing is hard to forget." I grin triumphantly I had no idea that such a day would actually happen. How much time did I spend wanting to confront this shadow of my past? I thought I had lost my chance to face her when she suddenly moved away in the middle of 8th grade. I stare hard at her. She seems quite taken aback by my outburst. She lets a few moments pass before responding. I wait patiently with my arms crossed. "Um...Alice was it? I'm, I'm really sorry that I did that to you. I knew that I was a real asshole in middle school but I had no idea I had hurt you that badly. Can you ever forgive me?" She's actually apologizing to me I think, this isn't quite what I had imagined. This isn't exactly how I thought this would go down. I had thought, hoped that she would be unapologetic to the very end. Of course in my dreams we would also immediately start a long and drawn out fight. The question is should I forgive her? It's true she did hurt me deeply but I managed to get over it eventually. Still, I have to do this for my inner child. I clench my fist, give her my most vicious glare and passionately declare. "No. No, I can never forgive you. I will never forgive you! From this day forward you are my enemy!" I feel like such a badass right now, I think as I abruptly turn my back and coldly leave her without looking back. I feel like skipping but I find someway to keep my terrible joy in check. Veronica watches Alice leave, still in something of a bewildered state. She had never thought that she would be confronted by such a ugly part of her past. She had wanted college to be a fresh start for her and now this had happened. College starts tomorrow and already there is someone here that hates me. Still, she wouldn't let that get too her, couldn't let that get to her. She would just have to apologize to her again, apologize until she finally relented. Shame that things had to happen that way she was actually kind of cute, in a really weird way. Veronica finally decides to head back to her own dorm. The sun is starting to set and she still has a lot to plan for the next day. She looks back in the direction that woman had departed from. "Alice Blackwood huh?"

Creature Romances because misery is a thing best shared Other than that Campus Notes: Forget Me Not turned out to be quite funny.

Yeah I think in even regular eroges it would be good to see the guys visibly instead of a disembodied husk or some faceless horror.

Also, isn't the fact that there aren't many 18+ otomie games out there all the more reason to make one? (At least in English) Don't the best market leaders provide a product or a service that is currently underused or not in existence? What better way of standing out against the tide of visual novels that are out there. Especially if it's a VN of great quality.

I think as long as the scenes were handled in a mature and realistic way and were well written (which almost 90% of eroges fail at) then it would be fine. You could go the route with many adult games that wind up on steam and make a adult patch that they could use later.

The Wire + Training day + Mad Max + The Wicker man? I don't know how those could go together (well except for the wire and training day) but I find it to be very intriguing.

Well for me I've noticed that my attention span is not what it used to be so I have a harder time staying engaged with a Visual Novel over it's slow parts. Right now I'm playing Aoishiro and while I'm liking quite a bit right now it spends far too much time focused on talking about food and obscure Japanese folklore than by advancing the plot. At this point it feels like I'm drowning in all these terms that I can barely understand and could care less about. Still I am really enjoying the visuals and characters and the story is interesting enough to hold my attention which I think is the most important thing.

So it's like a alternative version of Casper the friendly ghost right? This is just amazing in so many different ways. It's just pure poetry. From Onee-chan Hunters! Boku-tachi o Koufun Saseru Onee-chan ga Waruinda! Natsuyasumi Hen The three of us are hole brothers 4 life yo. We love to target naughty older sister types and PUNISH them. There's nothing more fun than fucking onesans. The girls don't know they're being bad, bad girls. It's those perfect curves poured into tight blouses and skirts that drives guys wild, and they walk around like they own the world. God it makes me hard. Their looks and their scent... girls be begging for it yo! It's their fault we get horny! Gonna make them cry. Weep with lust on this big dick. Shriek like the whores their fathers would be ashamed to see. Bad girls, you're all bad girls! We're comin' to get you! We are the Big Sis Hunters. Gonna make them cry. Weep with lust on this big dick. That's like the best line ever. I'm sure if you tried proposing to a woman using this line she would say yes. 60% of the time, it works every time.

People get sad, people get mad. Then they never stop complaining.

Such a great intro song

Okay so here are mine 10/10 It was damn near perfect and it did something that really effected me. Whatever flaws it has I can easily look over. 9/10 Still a near perfect game but it either had one flaw that was noticeable enough for me to not feel it deserved a 10 or it didn't effect me enough. 8/10 It was a very good game and I completely enjoyed my time with it. 7/10 It was good but it had one two many flaws or things that I just didn't like about it. 6/10 It was just decent and generally pretty forgettable. 5/10 Not very good at all but it had something that it did well. 4/10 Pretty bad but far from being terrible. The sex was alright? 3 to 1 Games that I found to be pretty abhorrent but still played through anyway.

Seems pretty good man I wish you luck in your endeavors. I think I would have real trouble writing about children I'm sure any dialogue I wrote would end up sounding really weird. Anyway, this makes me jealous and I'm going to post something of my own, so there!

HERE'S GAE BOLG!!!! THIS IS PERFECT IN EVERY WAY!!!!

Played through Maki's route and stalled out on Ai's. I might give it another go now that everything is completed. Maki is my favorite one of them so far I love her expressions plus she is a badass. The reason I stalled out on Tsujjo is that I absolutely fucking hate Saeko. She is so annoying and unfunny and is consequently in nearly every scene. It's just like whenever I see her I'm like

I was the same way. You see it all starts once you have enough money for them then you will be all like, "Well hell I can afford it so what's stopping me?" That's how it begins, and it will happen to you in some form. I walk the razors edge every night when I'm browsing, usually the only thing that stops me is the fact that a lot of the stuff that I want are out of stock. Some of the stuff though.. (glances at the figurine of Velvet Crowe and Saber Motored Cuirassier) No I mustn't!