Dergonu

Decided to try out the first raidy game, as I bought all three a few days ago. Went ahead and completed most of the game yesterday and finished it today. It was seriously entertaining. I mean, it was dumb... but entertaining On the untranslated side, I'm still going through kimisora and finished the An route. Not much to say other than the fact that it was freaking beautiful. It started off pretty simple and a little boring, but it got a lot better towards the middle, and the ending was just perfect. Moving over to the Matsuri route now, then I think I'll go over to reading something else. The last two heroines don't interest me that much, as I really only started the game for Matsuri and An, though Sekka's route being really great was a pleasant surprise. I'll definitely return to the last 2 endings at a later date, but right now, my reading time is so limited, I want to make sure I save it for stuff I really want to read. Thinking of reading ChuSinGura 46+1 next, as the game looks really interesting, (and let's face it, the English translation is NEVER actually happening )

Yeah it ended up a little bit rushed, as it was quite difficult to have the GMs fight the remaining "normal" people, and since both Down and Nosebleed were down to only one member, there wasn't much room for a lot of battles. So I tried something a bit different. Glad to hear people enjoyed it, it was a lot of fun writing it

He didn't pay me! *hides the 100 dollars in his hand* The story was actually Kaguya's idea originally, though it wasn't quite... this. He said that if I wrote a fanfic about him, then he would make me a board mod Then I suggested that there was a battle between the global mods, where Kaguya killed everyone, and he said that if I put some acutal effort into it, then sure. The part about making me a mod was obviously just a joke, but I actually wanted to write the story, as I thought it would be a fun little community event, and we had so many people join in, which made it so much more fun. Then I just kinda started improvising, and my writing evolved as I got through the chapters, and here we are. That's how I roll!

Alright, just as promised, got it released exactly 18:00! (Or maybe 18:01... Think it might have been 18:01... Fuck...) Anyways, the font in this one might be a little different during certain parts, had to re-do some of the chapter as I ran into some issues with the format. But hopefully it's not a big problem. This has been quite fun. Hopefully you guys have enjoyed it! Here is the last chapter!

The last GM standing Q&A: Link to the thread: Would you rather read the chapters in a PDF document? Click here! Chapter 1: Chapter 2: Chapter 3: (Word count, 4439) The Last GM Standing Chapter 4 (Word count, 3984) The Last GM Standing Chapter 5 (Word count, 4491) The Last GM Standing Chapter 6 (Word count 3334) - Finale, part 1/2 - The Last GM Standing (Word count, 3832) Chapter 7 Finale Part 2/2! "Raaawr! Take this!" Gijimu charged towards Nosebleed, striking at his chest with all his might. At the same time, Jade chanted a spell and several dark chains sprouted from the ground, wrapping themselves around Nosebleed's legs. Greenshadow622 was also attacking, striking at Nosebleed's back from behind with his blade. "... Pathetic." Nosebleed simply caught Gijimu's punch with his bare hand, used his left leg to kick Greenshadow's sword away, and broke through Jade's chains like they were made out of air. Still, the attackers did not waver. They kept their assault going, trying to land even just a singular hit. "Raaawr!" Gijimu took a step back, then jumped forward, bringing his right foot towards Nosebleed's head with great force. Nosebleed avoided the kick as if it was approaching in slow motion, and grabbed Gijimu's leg, picking him up and throwing him away. "Tch. You ... monster!" Shouting at Nosebleed, Jade prepared another attack and started chanting again. "Devourer of light, bane of the living, ruler of death, envelop the w..." But before he could finish, Nosebleed moved his left hand downwards, and the string attached to his wrist made one of his shuriken fly towards Jade with great speed. "Watch out!" Greenshadow jumped in between the shuriken and his teammate, and blocked the attack with his shield, but in the process, his shield was splintered into a million pieces. Both team Kaguya members were thrown several meters backwards from the impact. "Ugh ... You guys are all freaking useless." A voice coming from behind him made Nosebleed turn around. Kaguya was sitting on a nearby rock, looking at his underlings getting beaten. "Guess I'll have to put in an effort." "..." Looking at the warriors on the ground, then back at Kaguya, Nosebleed shook his head. "You aren't worthy of commanding them. I'll end the battle here today, and avenge my fallen." Nosebleed's face was distorted into a hateful scowl. "Haha. Now that would be a fun sight. Come on then. Give it your best shot." Kaguya spread his arms in a taunting manner and got up from the rock. Nosebleed moved his hands around, making his shuriken fly towards Kaguya's position. Kaguya caught one in the air, and swatted the other one away with his free arm. The shuriken caught in his hand wasn't able to pierce his skin, and the one he deflected collided with the ground, making a loud bang as the magical weapon crushed the earth beneath it. "Hmph. Weak!" Kaguya started running towards Nosebleed, preparing for a counterattack. "You're too cocky." With those words, Nosebleed snapped his fingers, and the shuriken in Kaguya's hand glowed. Before Kaguya had any time to realize what was happening, a small magic circle appeared above the shurkien, and a second later it blew up. A massive explosion enveloped Kaguya, making the ground beneath his feet cave in, and a massive cloud of smoke and dust settled over the battlefield. Nosebleed had made a shield in front of himself before the explosion occurred, protecting himself from the explosion. "Gaaah... Now that one stung a bit..." Slowly walking out of the smoke could, Kaguya was once again approaching Nosebleed. His clothes were full of black spots and holes, and his arm that caught the blast was charred, but other than that, he seemed fine. "Tch. I'm not done yet!" Nosebleed tensed his legs, and then jumped right up into the air. His body flew upwards, and once he had moved up about 15 meters or so, he brought his hands together, chanting a spell. As he chanted, Nosebleed's body was suspended in the air, like he was flying. A pink magic circle with black markings appeared before him, and slowly grew in size. "This will take you down a peg!" He shouted, and the magic circle erupted into a blinding light, sending hundreds of shuriken tied to strings down towards Kaguya. Every single one of them were tied to Nosebleed's wrist, making it possible for him to control them like he had done with the previous two. The shuriken he created rained down towards Kaguya, and were mere seconds from hitting him. "Shimmer, spear of Helios! Flicker, and pierce all that stands before you, burn down all resistance and turn flesh to ashes!" Suddenly raising his voice, Kaguya chanted a spell as quickly as he could, and right after, the ground beneath his feet broke apart, making a big pillar of fire shoot up towards Nosebleed. It was the same spell that his underling, Eclipsed, had taken his own life with. A powerful fire spell, summoning the strength of one of the most powerful fire aspects. The pillar of fire broke through all the shuriken, turning them into dust, and kept on moving towards Nosebleed, who put up a last minute shield in a panic. Because he was also caught in the fire, Kaguya felt some of his strength drain from his body as the scorching fire assaulted his flesh. The fire hit Nosebleed's shield, crushing it to pieces, and Nosebleed was caught in the relentless flames. .... "This really is the final battle, huh?" FinalChaos was seated in front of his master, Down, who had been wounded by the other GMs a little earlier. Now FinalChaos, the last remaining team Down member, was protecting his fallen master, while he watched the epic duel between the other two GMs. FinalChaos was clutching his swords so hard that blood was starting to run down his hands. There was nothing he could do versus such monsters. If it really came down to it, there was no way he could stop Kaguya or Nosebleed from killing Down in his current state. "DAMNIT!" FinalChaos shouted, and punched the ground with great force. "... Let them come. I might not be able to win, but I'll make damn sure it will be hard for them!" .... Nebjula was slowly walking calmly towards the heat of the battle. His eyes were without light, his mentality weakened. Upon witnessing so many people die, his last ally dying before his eyes was the last drop. He no longer cared. It was too late... He wouldn't survive like this, so why even care? He was ready for his final battle. The last fight. His right hand was missing a finger, and streams of fresh blood rand down his right mace, making it look even more menacing. The pain of his missing finger meant nothing. He walked forwards with no particular destination in mind, only having one though present in his mind... He would fight... He would fight... _________________________________________________________________ Team Nosebleed's last member, Nebjula vs Team Down's last member, FinalChaos Someone were approaching. FinalChaos pulled himself together and looked forward. The figure of a person could be seen walking towards him. The person was holding two weapons, and from the look of his armor, he was a member of team Nosebleed. But it was hard to see exactly, as his cloak was completely covered in blood. "I'm coming to get you... I'm coming to get youuuu!~" The person suddenly started talking, and the words he uttered sent a chill down FinalChaos' spine. Who was it? Preparing his blades for battle, Finalchaos looked at Down one last time and then turned around to face his opponent. "Split their skulls... Hehe..." The team Nosebleed member was quite close now, still rambling. His tone of voice was chilling. As he was just about two meters away from FinalChaos, he stopped completely. He held two maces, and his right hand looked wounded, as fresh blood was still pouring out from an open wound. The man suddenly looked up, and his empty eyes stared into FinalChaos'. "... Die..." Nebjula suddenly moved his right arm, and threw one of his maces at FinalChaos. The sudden move made FinalChas flinch, and he struggled with avoiding the oncoming mace. The spike at the end of the weapon grazed FinalChaos' shoulder as it flew past him. Following close behind the mace, Nebjula ran towards his opponent, lifting his left mace. FinalChaos struck at Nebjula with one of his swords, but Nebjula easily dodged it and ran straight into FinalChaos. Nebjula's head collided with FinalChaos' solar plexus, knocking the air out of him. "Guh..." FinalChaos staggered backwards, but managed to keep his footing. Nebjula quickly followed up with another attack, swinging his mace at FinalChaos. Every attack was mighty powerful, making FinalChaos flinch as the wind made by the mace hit his eyes. "I'm coming to get you!!!" Nebjula kept on rambling, and suddenly ran straight past FinalChaos. Wait ... Coming to get you..? Is he talking about?! "DOWN, NO!" As FinalChaos realized what Nebjula's goal was, he shouted at the top of his lungs and threw his sword at Nebjula. The sword soared through the air at a great speed, and after a second, it collided with its target. The sword pierced through Nebjula's back, cutting through his lungs and parts of his spine. But ... It was already too late. Nebjula had just enough time to move his mace for one attack, which had been directed right at Down. Down was still unconscious, which meant his barrier was the only thing still protecting him, and it had been seriously weakened in the attack from Kaguya earlier... Nebjula's mace had crushed the remaining barrier, and had hit Down's defensless body, crushing his ribcage completely. "... AHHHHHH!" Not knowing how to react, FinalChaos just kept screaming, and threw his other blade at the already dead Nebjula. FinalChaos shook his head as tears ran down his cheeks. His final job ... His final purpose... It had been to defend Down, and he had failed. His knees gave in beneath him, and his body fell to the ground. He slammed his fist against the bare ground over and over, most likely breaking the bone, but he didn't care. "I ... Failed..." Because the leader had died, all of Down's remaining soldiers would be disposed of. The one last remaining warrior, FinalChaos, shouted and screamed as he cursed himself for letting Down die... Soon after, his body turned to dust... Team Nosebleed, Nebjula- DEAD END Team Down, FinalChaos- DEAD END Team Down leader, Down-DEAD END _________________________________________________________________ 12Kami was looking at the battle from above, his body floating as if it was tied up by strings. "One ... Dead... Two to go..." His yellow eyes shimmered brightly, and the scythe he was holding in his right hand was glowing in a green light. Down had been defeated, which mean that Down and all his dead warriors were sealed away in the reaper's scythe, and they would never come back. 12Kami remembered the rules that were branded into his mind. 1) The GMs are not allowed to fight until the final day. Stop them at all costs. 2) Once the GMs finally clash, only one can come out alive. If they refuse to fight, kill them yourself. 3) Once the winner has been crowned... The winner and all his forces will be released from the game, and all the deceased teammates will be resurrected. The members of the losing teams will forever be trapped in the reaper's scythe. 4) ... If you wish, you may challenge the winner. If you can defeat him, you will get your own freedom, and will be released from the hell we have trapped you in. "... Two to go..." 12Kami whispered to himself as he looked at the battle below. What should he do? ... _________________________________________________________________ The final battle, Nosebleed vs Kaguya, Gijimu, Greenshadow622 and Jade .... Nosebleed's body was aching, screaming in pain. Kaguya's attack had broken his shield, and the only thing that saved him from a sure death was his final remaining barrier. It had taken a lot of energy, but Nosebleed had been able to fight off the relentless heat, and survived the attack, but in return, his body was enveloped in pain. He had felt it... His final warrior, the last remaining teammate he had on the battlefield, had just died. It was over. Nosebleed was alone. Shaking his head in anger, tears ran down Nosebleed's cheeks. "I wont ... let you die in vain! AHHHHHHHH!" Screaming as loud as he could, Nosebleed forced himself to his feet and charged towards Kaguya's location. Kaguya was still recovering, as the attack had hit his own body as well. "Puppets! Stop him!" Kaguya shouted and pointed towards his underlings who were standing next to him. "Buy me some time! Hold him back!" The three team Kaguya members were slightly scared of fighting the GM on their own, but still listened to their master, running towards the advancing Nosebleed. Gijimu preformed a swift kick at Nosebleed's legs, trying to make him Trip. Nosebleed avoided the kick with ease, and retaliated with a punch to Gijimu's chest. Gijimu managed to block the attack, but both his arms screamed in pain as Nosebleed's fist hit, and the bone in his left arm broke. Jade cast several spells from a few meters away, while Greenshadow started cutting at Nosebleed with his blade. His shield had been broken earlier, so his sword was his only remaining weapon. Nosebleed avoided the attacks, and started chanting a spell as he kept on approaching Kaguya. "O great shadow, sever the bonds of the flesh, divide, split, divide!" As he chanted, Nosebleed's body suddenly split into four, and each part approached an enemy, the main body still continuing towards Kaguya. Gijimu's broken arm was dangling at his side, useless, and he had to fight off his enemy with his remaining limbs. Jade was doing his best, trying to keep his opponent at a distance. Greenshadow was being pushed back as well, and Kaguya was still recovering from his wounds. As no one were able to reach Nosebleed's main body, he continued his chant. "Divide, split, divide! fire, earth, water, air, sever the bonds of the flesh, release me from the chains of man, and grant me the strength of thou, oh great shadow." When the chant finished, each one of Nosebleed's bodies erupted in a bright light. A round seal holding a picture of an element on it, appeared on his chest. Fire, earth, water and air, one for each body. The main body that was running towards Kaguya was water, the opposite of Kaguya's favored magic. "It is time to end things, Kaguya!" While he shouted at his opponent, Nosebleed raised his right arm, and it morphed into a blade made out of water. He was now mere meters from Kaguya, and prepared the blade, striking at Kaguya's chest. Kaguya had regained most of his strength, and was able to avoid the attack, but Nosebleed quickly recovered and continued his assault, sending a flurry of attacks towards his opponent. Kaguya managed to sidestep, and clenched his fists, making fire envelop his hands. It was the same attack he had used to take out Down. He struck at Nosebleed with great power, but the water surrounding Nosebleed's body weakened the oncoming attack, making the impact much too weak. The inefficiency of his attack made Kaguya flinch for a second, but he quickly came back to his senses. "Ok, then how about this?!" Kaguya took a big step backwards and held his hands out, moving them towards Nosebleed. As he did that, the ground beneath Nosebleed's feet started moving, and several spikes of earth quickly approached Nosebleed's chest. "I don't think so." A voice came from Kaguya's left, and the spikes that were approaching the main body of Nosebleed stopped completely. A different Nosebleed was standing a little further away, holding the body of Greenshadow622 in his hand. The symbol for earth was branded on his chest. Using any form of elemental magic against Nosebleed would be completely useless. Gijimu and Jade were still fighting their opponents, but Nosebleed was clearly about to beat them as well. It seemed Kaguya was on his own. "Hmph. Fine. Guess we will have to settle this the old fashioned way." Kaguya kept his cool, and raised his fists. After just a few seconds, the other two Nosebleed versions had defeated their opponents, and Kaguya was now staring at four enemies. "You know, when I see you up close like this, I have to say... You guys are all butt ugly." "Any other last words Kaguya?" One of the Nosebleed's spoke up, slowly approaching. "How about bite me?" With those words, Kaguya stepped forward and struck at one of his opponents with all his might. His left fist struck the water version of Nosebleed right in the chest, and a loud cracking sound of bones breaking resounded throughout the battlefield. The body he had struck broke in two, making blood and bone fragments fly everywhere. "I'm not going down that easy!" After easily having defeated one opponent, Kaguya moved over to the next one. He struck at the earth version, his fist moving towards Nosebleed's chest yet again. This version managed to dodge the attack by a hair, but Kaguya followed up with another strike. It wasn't as powerful as the first two, but it hit Nosebleed's left arm, making the bone bend in the wrong direction. As Nosebleed staggered backwards, clutching his wounded arm, Kaguya struck at him again, making Nosebleed fall to the ground. Trouble was, even though Kaguya was doing well against one of the Nosebleed's, the two others were preparing a spell behind him. As Kaguya was about to land a finishing blow on the earth version of Nosebleed, the wind and fire version behind him sent powerful spells directed towards Kaguya's back. A spear of fire approached Kaguya's back, and the wind spell quickly wrapped itself around the fire attack, amplifying its intensity. The brutal attack dug into Kaguya's back, slowly melting his flesh and pushing Kaguya's body forward. He flew a few meters away, and landed on his wounded back. Kaguya tried to get up again, but the earth Nosebleed moved his still functional arm over to Kaguya and gripped his leg, preventing his movements. Meanwhile, the remaining two Nosebleed versions prepared one final attack. As another enhanced spear of fire approached Kaguya, it dawned on him ... He had lost. When he started fighting, he didn't think any of his opponents were actually worthy of being called equals... He still didn't. "... You got lucky." As he said those final words, the fire enveloped his body, and turned his remaining flesh to ash. "..." As Nosebleed witnessed his final enemy burn to a crisp, he said nothing... It was over, but he had lost way too many. This was not a time to celebrate. This was a time to mourn. Team Kaguya, Greenshadow622, Gijimu and Jade-DEAD END Team Kaguya leader, Kaguya-DEAD END .... .... ... .. "It looks like it's over. Congratulations." A dark, raspy voice spoke up from behind Nosebleed. Nosebleed said nothing in response, and simply sat down on the ground, covering his face. He was exhausted, and his emotions were running wild. "Congratulations." Repeating his previous line, the person who was talking walked past Nosebleed, and sat down in front of him. It was the cloaked reaper that Nosebleed had seen several times before, overlooking the battle. The reaper who had gotten in between Nosebleed and Down's previous fight. In his hand was a scythe, which now glowed in a dark red color. Several red and green dots were spread across the scythe's blade... Actually, there was also one section towards the tip of the blade, which had several pink dots on it. Seven to be exact... The number of Nosebleed's warriors. Could it be..? "Congratulations. You are the last one standing. You did well. Here is your reward." As the reaper spoke, he lifted his scythe up towards the sky, and the pink dots on the blade started glowing. The sky above the reaper turned dark, and clouds started forming out of nowhere. The clouds slowly started spinning around faster and faster, and after a little while, a full blown tornado had formed in the sky. The tornado slowly but surely moved down towards the two, however the wind was not affecting Nosebleed or the Reaper for some reason. It was as if the tornado was merely an illusion. As the eye of the storm reached the two figures, the wind settled at the tip of the reaper's blade, and the pink dots which were glowing brightly were sucked up into the tornado. Then, a completely blinding light shot out from the clouds, branching into seven smaller balls of light that all collided with the ground somewhere close to Nosebleed. As the wind settled and the light went away, seven people had appeared next to Nosebleed. They were all the fallen warriors from team Nosebleed that had been killed during the battle, Mitchhamilton, Kiriririri, Satsuki, Valmore, Deep Blue, Nebjula and Kingdomcome. Each one of them were completely unscratched, and they were staring at the reaper in front of them in awe, not knowing what was going on. "W-Where are we...?" Mitchhamilton spoke up, walking towards Nosebleed with a confused expression. The reaper was the one who answered. "You have won the battle, and you are free. Congratulations." Before anyone could say anything else, the reaper snapped his fingers, and the figures of the eight warriors disappeared into nothingness. They had been called back to the world of Fuwanovel, as the only eight survivors of the long death game. It was over. .... As the dust settled, and the winners had been teleported away, a figure of a man walked up to 12Kami. He was wearing a black suit, but the entirety of his body was enveloped in a dark shadow, making it impossible to see who it was. "So you chose to let them go. Why did you not fight them? Do you not value your own life?" The man's voice was distorted, much like the reaper's. "... I do not want to witness more bloodshed." The reaper answered, looking down at his feet. "Haha... Well, suit yourself. You do realize that this means you will be trapped in this dimension forever? You and ... them." As the man said the last word in the sentence, he pointed towards the reaper's scythe. The reaper, 12Kami knew... They were still there. They were still conscious, trapped inside the void. He could hear them. They were screaming... The 25 fallen warriors from team Down and Kaguya, as well as their two leaders... They were trapped in the reaper's scythe, and because they lost, they would never get out. They had suffered the same fate that 12Kami had. "Well then. Enjoy eternity listening to their screams." With that final line, the figure of the man vanished, and 12Kami was left alone. He looked at the scythe in his hands, as he heard the screams of the poor people trapped within it. "I'm sorry..." The end?... _________________________________________________________________

Well damn. They better give us the imouto route as well as the other two nekos in this one!

Victor Frankenstein looks kinda hot. I'd do him

That is really badass. Much better than that ... TV thing. 9/10

It's all RNG, like I explained in the Q&A RNG is funny sometimes. (I like how I myself was present in the chapters almost all the way to the end ) But hey, if you want to believe its totally rigged, that's fine too. (I totally wont write myself back into the story at the very end as the almighty God who kills everyone and wins! )

The final rolls have been completed, and the winner has been crowned. I will be writing the chapter today and will polish it tomorrow, the release will be 18:00 CEST on saturday! The remaining 5 warriors are: Team Nosebleed: @Nebjula Team Down: @FinalChaos Team Kaguya: @gijimu, @greenshadow622, @Jade Make your leaders proud and die fight for them! Down is currently down for the count, (hah, puns ), Nosebleed and Kaguya are in the middle of a duel, and the remaining warriors are scattered. How will this end? (Dergonu wakes up in his bed and realizes it was all a dream?? ) Stay tuned to find out!

Hey, welcome to the forum, nice to meet you

Hm, I kind of liked the MC in G-senjou. Guess it depends on the reader. The VN in my sig is Sono Hanabira ni kuchizuke o - Nyuu Jene. It's sadly untranslated at the moment. The couple is Ai and Aya.

Hey, welcome to the forum, nice to meet you! - Favorite VN Grisaia no kajitsu - Played nekopara and Sono Hana Yes! Someone who is doing it right! Hmm, recommendations. Just gonna list a few of my favorites. Katahane (Slightly old art, but the game is amazing) G-senjou no Maou Maji de watashi ni koishinasai Eden* Planetarian

Hey, welcome to the forum, nice to meet you Like littleshogun said, if you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask.

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Nice, bought it.

Oh wow, I see how that can be a problem then. That sucks. You should definitely try it out in your free time outside school, when you have the chance, especially if you really liked the anime. The LN series is great. The translation has been picked up again, so the new relases are still being translated, which is great. Currently there are 14 volumes. 3 chapters are translated of the last volume so far. If you want, I can try to edit out the PDFs and remove the pictures for you. I think it should be a fairly simple job.

Well, best of luck! Nice to see that you are excited about this. Can't wait to hear more about the story once you have more to show

Ew, no. Fuck that. It involves numbers. Eeew. False. The next person is scared of birds.

Still playing キミへ贈る、ソラの花. Skipping the Kana route for now and moving over to the An route, (because imouto loli = justice.) It's quite straight forward and eventless so far. Just a standard brocon imouto being super weird and clingy. But it's okay when she looks this cute! The way she speaks and her uber awkward reactions to being treated well by the MC is awesome Hopefully her route gets a little better towards the end. Currently it is quite predictable and nothing is really happening. But hey, at least it's cute

Hmm, Lord of the Rings Shawshank redemption South park the movie Don't really know what to say about why. Because they are awesome?

This ^^^^^ As for the ecchi pics, you can simply just .... skip printing the pictures? If you have it in a pdf format before you print it, just remove the pics from the PDF. Or just like draw over them or something. They aren't that bad anyways. No actual nudity in any of them.

^ That. It's amazing. Also, you should check out Eden* if you like planetarian. Slightly similar feel, and the story is just so, so beautiful.

My thought exactly after one hour in Clannad

noooo next person owes me 20$!!!