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  1. I will get a job solely to pledge to your Kickstarter, good sir! I am thinking of setting aside $200 or so. Nope, that's not my alt account
  2. Apart from all the things people already mentioned, I really want to read Kusarihime ~euthanasia~ after seeing this (spoily-ish, including Higurashi spoiras) review.
  3. Infinity series collection would be nice... and e17 for xbox 360, though I'd need an xbox, and I also kidna need a 3ds and psp and psv becau... alright alright. picshures: Apart from that chiruchiru, grisaia, tsukihime, f/sn, maybe a LL!Honoka fig because her ganbattegenkiness is kinda cute and the chara design is decent? Or Kotori, she's also nice. Nico a shit
  4. Confession: Monmon's new avatar really annoys me, too much movement (I dislike moving stuff in general but that's on the really bad end of the spectrum). Confession: I have been slacking off on muh Fuwaduties a lot lately, and not just because i was sick for like three days...
  5. >40 endings too many, writing will be spread too thin, game will be shit you heard it here first folks
  6. Note that that's ラブプラス, aka Love+. ...looks pretty cool, I don't care about love+ tho~
  7. I kinda agree with Run on Nico sucking though, definitely most shit member of Muse after seeing 10 eps
  8. Pretty sure he secretly has a search window up for "solidbatman"
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  10. [Ren is Nozomi best grill, NB hates Hyouka] <16:41:12> "Kendjin": NB going on a rant <16:41:22> "Nosebleed": I'm going on a rant because that series scarred me <16:41:22> "Down": It's like Ren when he's salty <16:41:34> "Kendjin": So all the time? <16:41:39> "Kendjin": <16:41:42> "Zakamutt": <16:41:51> "Nosebleed": I'm only ranting when someone brings up stuff i hate <16:41:54> "Down": Sorry for the pleonasm <16:42:21> "Kendjin": Damn manga app is taking up 6GB on my tablet <16:42:24> "Nosebleed": And it's because hyouka had the most boring plot, and the most annoying characters, that i couldn't even rate it as "average" <16:42:27> "Nosebleed": That is all <16:42:31> "Zakamutt": we need an icon pack which replaces Ren with an image of someone crying <16:42:49> "Nozomi Best Grill. 1000/10": fuck u lol [...] <17:09:25> "Nozomi Best Grill. 1000/10": know youre fucking privilege <17:09:39> "Nozomi Best Grill. 1000/10": im too good for english i can spell anything wrong i want <17:09:41> "Nozomi Best Grill. 1000/10": fuck u <17:09:56> "Nozomi Best Grill. 1000/10": YOURE DAMN RIGHT IM SALTY <17:11:05> "Down": What is it again <17:11:13> "Down": Nobody said anything but you're still ranting Teeku <17:11:35> "Nozomi Best Grill. 1000/10": DickButt <17:15:08> "Nayleenヽ(◕‿◕✿)ノ": you suck <17:17:15> "Kendjin": OriginalSalt strikes again
  11. Tay's prolly just gotten sick again, it happens
  12. I'd say either fuwamembers or fuwans. I prolly prefer "fuwan", though "fuwan" can also mean Fuwanovel the site, so that's weird but usable with context, eh.
  13. ^ That's actually a bit ominous, you know.
  14. Evangile is apparently looking to be somewhat meh, though good on the moe front... anyway MG has a decent lot of non-nukige titles and some of them are quite good, so I wouldn't dismiss them out of hand. Personal recommendations would probably be Eden* (have not read, pick all-ages or sex-added as you wish), Kira Kira (also has all-ages version), and Deardrops. Some more picks from what I haven't read would be the Cartagra / Kara no Shoujo series (Cartagra first) since Down is a huge fanboy. Aaeru really liked DCII but she was a big moege fan so that's probably a niche thing. Not sure if reading DCI is strongly recommended first, though there is some mythology shared iirc.
  15. I remember you from IRC golden days I guess they will never happen again, will they?
  16. Going back to the point on MG licensing subpar titles when they could get "better" ones, I suspect they might be trapped either by company willingness (they will request MG do certain titles first or w/e, has been mentioned by MG themselves) or licensing costs (presumably good old goddamn voices are a big part of that at times).
  17. ~old news~ Only said that through twatter though... Also of interest would be an interview with the game's localization editor: http://www.rpgamer.com/games/tokyotwilight/tokyotwilight/tokyotwilightint.html
  18. I don't know about this. You could argue for consistently using third person instead of doing all kinds of judgements and contortions every time you need to think about it. I didn't personally find anything wrong with how it was presented in nekopara. Insem actually did something similar for Chinami in Hoshimemo - quite a few lines don't necessarily have her refer to herself in third person, but still use third person. In the end it's still a valid choice to keep that consistency, imo. I'm used to the Japanese third person cutesyness in general though (and never considered it jarring anyway, I guess?), so whether it's there or not doesn't really affect me. Then again, I've gotten into the habit of referring to myself and others in third person without using names when speaking Swedish - so "do you want to know about x?" could be answered by me with "he is interested". Also for other people when talking to them when I should really use second person Entertaining, though also instinctive somehow... and no, it's not exactly correct Swedish. I just don't fuck a give.
  19. Welp, I'm bored, time for an honest, cruel opinion: The character description for Kusanagi on your Prefundia page has some serious issues. The writing is riddled with weird and sometimes plain incorrect phrasings, and it has not one but three typos / mis-spellings. These descriptions are something you should pay extra attention to as they are part of your advertisement campaign, so to speak. As writing is a key part of a visual novel, I am very skeptical as to the quality of whatever you'll put out. I'll just do a pass over said text with change suggestions / corrections so you see what I mean: Kusanagi is a lazy ass pervert with a kind heart even if he dreams to have his own harem of girls at his feet. Suggest "of having". Also, what's before "even if" doesn't really connect all that well to what's after it. If someone is in trouble he will help that person [arguable, but I'd use "them" here] no mater [this is spelled matter] what even if it's a stranger and especially if it's a close friend or family. He also practiced jujustu* [even the link points to jujutsu, and I've certainly heard of said martial art before. Typo #2.] (an old type of martial arts) and kendo since [the age of five? he was five (years old?)] five along with his childhood friend Kogata Sachi but stopped when after losing his temper and [no, you can't connect these with "and". "he broke" would work, but I'd rework it to "but stopped after he lost his temper and broke the arm of a bully"] broken [the tense used here is just obviously wrong if nothing else...] the arm of a bully. Aside from his harem that will never happpen, [this isn't technically wrong but feels really weird. Try "Aside from his fruitless dream of having his own harem..." he wants nothing more then* [than] to be a NEET/Hikikomori [getting run-on here] but sadly because of Sachi that always wakes him up and drags him to school [this whole chain of modifiers to Sachi is just weird. Try something like "but sadly because of Sachi always waking him up and dragging him to school he can't.", though ending on "he can't" is still kind of awkward as well...] he can't. He is smart and witty when it counts and knows how to keep his grounds [the expression you're reaching for is "stand his ground" or possibly "carry himself". "Keep his grounds" would probably interpreted as something like "knows how to make sure the area around his house is kept in a good state (tending to gardens, raking the gravel paths and such); being a groundskeeper is a kind of job.] in a fight be it kendo/swords [no, you need to make "kendo/swords" (which you should turn into "kendo/sword"; you don't say "swords fight") into a noun here in some way. Probably "be it a kendo/sword or fist fight." Still doesn't sound that good, though. What about "whether it be fought with the shinai, sword, or his fists."?] or fist fight. This is just me proposing changes that still keep the same basic structure. It's not really all that punchy or anything though - you could probably spice up the writing decently... lemme try: While he's a lazy ass pervert who dreams of having a harem of girls at his feet, Kusanagi has a surprisingly kind hearted side. When he sees someone in trouble, he feels compelled to help them whether they be a family member, close friend or even a stranger. He started practising jujutsu (an old kind of martial art) and kendo together with his childhood friend Kogata Sachi at the age of five, but stopped after breaking a bully's arm in a fit of rage. Besides his fruitless dreams of having his own harem, all he wants to do is become a NEET/hikikomori. It is not to be, though, as Sachi has made a habit of waking him up and dragging him off to school whether he likes it or not. Kusanagi can be a charming, intelligent man when he has to, and knows how to carry himself in a fight whether it be fought with the sword, shinai, or his fists alone. Seem better? The art also looks somewhat inconsistent in shading style (character 2 vs 1 3 and 4) and the anatomy of CG 2 looks very weird (is her left arm broken? I'm not sure if it works even then.) etc. this is coming from a guy who doesn't really think Key's art in Rewrite is all that weird / notice anything at all. All of this leaves me with a very negative impression. I would not recommend pledging to your project, and unless your writer can step it up or you get an editor who can essentially rewrite four fifths of the sentences your writer puts out, I suggest you cancel it altogether to prevent creating something utterly mediocre or worse (I suppose the art is decent, so that might be the high point.) Pretty harsh... but I think it needed to be said.
  20. Well, I quit tales of phantasia the game right when I could get into the final dungeon... I tend to just get stuck and watch anime in 4-6 ep spurts, but I practically never drop anything. Which leads to me watching very little anime~
  21. You make my heart go boomer~
  22. Do note that Sakura Spirit was fairly cheap, so actual profit would be somewhat lower than you might think.. though probably not that much.
  23. Honey, it's like you're Taylored just for me
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