Polycentric

False, that would make me feel really old. Next person doesn't like wearing jeans.

Looks very promising. The art looks super nice. Haven't played a strictly yuri VN yet (have read manga and watched anime) so hopefully this'll be a nice baptism. Maybe the enforced playing order won't be a complete train wreck.

I guess this is basically what rose said, but there are just a few typos that catch my eye whenever I read through. I think to should be of. "Time is managed by the player and they will have 6 months..." One other thing is that during the description of Rah, it says that "As a result Rah had an unusually high amount of ... But the side effect is that he has what we consider..." The first sentence makes it sound like Rah is dead because he had those powers and no longer has them. It doesn't really match with the next sentence of him currently having dementia and living. Like Rose said, get an editor and you should be fine. One layout comment I have is that I think the "Features" section could be located right before the "Mechanics" section because those two go together. Also just a question, will there be no English text option during passages? The languages only states Japanese (text) and English (voices). The game looks really nice, I like how the art is very unique. Looks like a promising game, hope your funding goes well!

What a true classic. I remember playing melee and trying bunches of different combos to rack up percentage and send the bag flying. 8.5/10.

In the Temporal (Default) theme the background image doesn't change regardless of how hard I mash my mouse button on the images. Does anybody else have this issue?

I think eden* surpassed my expectations for it by quite a bit. I didn't have super high expectations for it because of how short I saw it was supposed to be. Also I'm not a huge fan of lolis, but eden* crafted a wonderful story in the short amount of time it took up.

We won't need US History courses anymore with this 100% accurate post.

False, I can live with mistakes. Next person likes snow.

I'll have to say hero. She looks like a very virtuous person although her weapon does look a little sinister. Saitou Dousan Hero or villain?

Sometimes the save files aren't inside of the actual game folder and might be hiding out inside of the Documents folder or a Program Files folder if you downloaded the game files in another folder. Hope this helped if you didn't already find a solution.

False, although I did want one as a kid. Next person prefers hot climates over cold climates.

True, I was just snacking on some chips and dip. Next person doesn't snack very often.

True, although I would like to go sometime. Next person thinks 2D > 3D.

False, it doesn't really bother me too much. Next person is easily excitable.

False, but best hopes to your father. I hope he gets well soon! Next person likes gardening.

False. I wasn't sure what creosote was, but google said it smelled like antiseptic or preservatives and usually I don't fare too well with heavily chemical smells. Next person likes the smell of ozone.

I think with social anxiety and talking to other people, what has helped me is remembering is that most people in the world are nice people and that nothing really bad can happen from speaking up. Also to sort of continue on Rooke's quote, I've found that keeping healthy habits has increased my confidence around others in social situations. Just remember that we're always here together.

False, at least I think so. Next person is not organized.

True, optics wasn't too bad whenever I took physics. Next person enjoys physics.

False, I never use the h-scene collection. Next person likes moe art.

True, I was in my school choir for two years until I figured singing was not for me. Next person enjoys parties.

True, but I just got contacts. Only reason I'm not wearing them right now is because I was short on time this morning. Next person doesn't like movies.

A little scary, 9/11.

False, I would severely injure myself trying to dance regardless if anybody is watching. Next person enjoys cereal.

False. Skyscrapers are fascinating. Next person is in a good mood.